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Lesson 44 改写Walk out of the forest

发布者: 茹诗 | 发布时间: 2009-3-21 00:36| 查看数: 1433| 评论数: 5|

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本帖最后由 tezukazyunko 于 2009-3-21 15:03 编辑

Lesson 44 改写 Out of the forest



Lili did not think of the risk she was taking when she walked through a forest behind a man and a woman, because the man seemed like her husband .

The man and the woman are very good friends , when the woman was in trouble she always came to the man.

One day ,they walked across a small road beside Lili while she was having a picnic at the edge of a forest with her classmates .The woman talked something about her marriage with the man , she said that her family was broken and ,with the heart of her husband in another lady’s possession. After a while , both of them started walking into the woods . Lili got so angry that she ran after them , she was soon near them , but she held her breath and continued to follow them slowly , when she caught up with them ,she saw that they had sat down on the grass and the woman was going through the contents of her handbag , when she took out a piece of paper which was the divorce agreement and she handed it to that man . Lili rushed up to her and got it quickly .the woman got such a fright that she dropped the bag and she was shocked standing there . Lili ran straight at her angrily , “ your heart needs mending ” she said , “ but you mustn’t do anything to hurt another one ”, and then , she hole her hsuband’s hand walked away .

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because the man seemed like her husband 我觉得用looked like 比较好,如果要用seem的话,应该是seemd to be吧?

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tezukazyunko 发表于 2009-3-21 00:36:33
because the man seemed like her husband

我觉得用looked like 比较好,如果要用seem的话,应该是seemd to be吧?
tezukazyunko 发表于 2009-3-21 12:08:34
The man and the woman are very good friends , when the woman was in trouble she always came to the man. 两个the man?有点重复了,换成she always turned to him for help!
tezukazyunko 发表于 2009-3-21 12:09:52
she said that her family was broken,for the heart of her husband was in another lady’s possession
tezukazyunko 发表于 2009-3-21 12:14:25
but you should never do anything to hurt another one ”, then , she held her hsuband’s hand and walked away .

just my views
茹诗 发表于 2009-3-21 12:22:25
tezukazyunko 您好: 太好了, 我来过几次了, 看到这些建议很兴奋, 嘻嘻, 明白你指出的这些了。 谢谢你我的好老师和版主。
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