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请各位老师帮我看看短文里的的问题, 谢谢。

发布者: 茹诗 | 发布时间: 2009-3-18 23:57| 查看数: 1397| 评论数: 9|

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lesson 43 改写-1 Fly over the sea of English knowledge

In June 2007 , one year after I finished over NCE book one , I quickly began to learn NCE book two for the first time .Though , at first l ,my English classmates and I were able to make some simple sentences and read a little short articles, we soon ran into serious trouble .At one point , it seemed certain that our English learning plan wouldn’t been finished by ourselves .It could only get over NCE book two if it spent a lot of time in learning English grammar , remembering many new words and remembering some important key structures from a good English teacher.

I at once ordered myself to throw out many other Englis books and entered into NCE English home room to spend

all free time learning

NCE book two.

The plan was then able to continue

.I now knew that I would be able to finish the plan which was learning, reciting and repeating the lessons , for there were no more difficulties

in my sight , meanwhile I met a

nice teacher at NCE home room who taught us selflessly everyday, he was taking us to fly over the endless sea of English knowledge without difficulty .

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it seemed certain that our English learning plan wouldn’t be finished by ourselves I now knew ?时态不太对应哦! just my own views

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tezukazyunko 发表于 2009-3-18 23:57:47
it seemed certain that our English learning plan wouldn’t be finished by ourselves

I now knew ?时态不太对应哦!

just my own views
茹诗 发表于 2009-3-19 14:31:09
谢谢您. 我去改正过来.
茹诗 发表于 2009-3-19 14:44:41
您好: 我看了一下新概念2册的43课,那里也是用的:berd now knew... 上课的时候我就想问老师了.. .忘了...我没理解,就照抄过来了...不好意思.帮我想想, 为什么这样用哪?

thank you again .
茹诗 发表于 2009-3-19 14:47:16
另外,我想知道, 我通篇用的这些词汇是正确的吗?可以这样用吗?我只是跟着感觉这样"临摹"的, 真正不知道这些词的具体用法.别笑我哈.
tezukazyunko 发表于 2009-3-19 19:39:39
[1_28]呵呵,一篇文章的时态还是在大环境下来定的!now本身是与一般时态对应,换言之,既可以与一般现在时也可以与一般过去时连用!但是新概念的文章叙述的是别人的、而且是讲故事型的,所以就与一般过去时连用,但我觉得你的文章写的是自己的事情,最好与现在时连用,除非你刻意要表现过去的“知道”!
tezukazyunko 发表于 2009-3-19 19:43:22
It could only get over NCE book two if it spent a lot of time in learning English grammar , remembering many new words and remembering(omit) some important (omit)key structures from a good English teacher.

英语中如果宾语的动词是同一个,一般不需要再重复

另外,我们汉语喜欢说非常重要而关键的!但英语中,这两个词词意差不多,最好删去一个,不然,老外会觉得罗嗦!
tezukazyunko 发表于 2009-3-19 19:44:32
词汇上没有大问题!这样用别人都能懂,不会有歧义的!
茹诗 发表于 2009-3-19 22:08:25
老师, 我觉得你很认真。如果要是投票转正的话, 我投一票哈。 谢谢回答如此详细,有理有据,谢谢。
tezukazyunko 发表于 2009-3-19 22:19:18
[1_28]哈哈,谢谢哦!
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