hi ,every one <FONT size=5>so long no see </FONT>
<FONT size=5>now ,I am still need to go to school for I  am   a   senior  3  student.</FONT>
<FONT size=5>actually , i like chatting ,if you want to chat with me ,you can add me QQ   or  my  uc 47450235</FONT>
<FONT size=5>and my skype:fairy02119</FONT>
<FONT size=5>i am in physics class ,we have three girl ,and one is my deskmate :May ,i like her  very much ,i always make a joke on her ,but many people thought i treat her badly ,but actually ,i like her very much ,</FONT>
<FONT size=5>sorry for i have no time no w,i must go to school tomorrow</FONT>

<STRONG>hi ,every one so long no see </STRONG>
<FONT color=#ff0000 size=4><STRONG>Hi every one, long time no see.</STRONG></FONT>
<STRONG></STRONG><STRONG>now ,I am still need to go to school for I  am   a   senior  3  student. </STRONG>
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<STRONG><FONT color=#ff0000>At this moment, I am still attending school, I am a 3rd year senior high school student.</FONT></STRONG>
<STRONG>actually , i like chatting ,if you want to chat with me ,you can add me QQ   or  my  uc 47450235 </STRONG>
<STRONG><FONT color=#ff0000>I actually enjoy chatting alot. If you would like to chat with me, you could add my QQ or my UC # 47450236.</FONT></STRONG>
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<STRONG>and my skype:fairy02119</STRONG>   
<STRONG><FONT color=#ff0000>And my Skype ID is fairy02119</FONT></STRONG>
<p><STRONG>i am in physics class ,we have three girl ,and one is my deskmate :May ,i like her  very much ,i always make a joke on her ,but many people thought i treat her badly ,but actually ,i like her very much ,</STRONG> <FONT color=#ff0000>(This part I have hard time understand you)</FONT>
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<STRONG>sorry for i have no time no w,i must go to school tomorrow.</STRONG>
<STRONG><FONT color=#ff0000>I have to go to school tomorrow, therefore sorry I have no time to chat now.</FONT> </STRONG>

<FONT size=4>So quickie wolf, a really good proofreading, so I don't think I have something more to say, thans very much, buddie~</FONT>

hey ,QQ now i will explain that part to you ,
that means ,i like my deskmate very much ,but the way i espress my feeling is a little different from others .for example ,i like to play a trick on her ,so that make my classmates thought i always treat her badly .

<FONT color=#000000>At this moment, I am still attending school(,)--&gt;(Run-on sentence) I am a 3rd year senior high school </FONT><FONT color=#000000>student.</FONT>
Use a full stop or, in this case, a colon to introduce the statement "I am a 3rd...."<br>
re: i am in physics class ,we have three girl ,and one is my deskmate :May ,i like her  very much ,i always make a joke on her ,but many people thought i treat her badly ,but actually ,i like her very much <STRONG>,</STRONG> <FONT color=#ff0000>(This part I have hard time understand you)</FONT><br>
Let me make a guess:
I am in the physics class. There are three girls in this class, one of whom is my deskmate, May. I like here very much. I often <STRONG>play</STRONG> tricks on her, and many people thought I treat her badly. But actually, I like her very much.  (The commas in the original sentence would lead to "run-on" sentences."(i))  
<FONT size=2>(i) Common mistakes in writing Group I: Common Mistakes  by Yeti:<a href="http://www.rainlane.com/dispbbs.asp?BoardID=8&amp;ID=13605" target="_blank" >http://www.rainlane.com/dispbbs.asp?BoardID=8&amp;ID=13605</A>1. Run-on sentences : messages 2 to 3 第  2 to 3 楼 )<o:p></o:p></FONT>

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