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Last autumn ,there was a husband and a wife came form beijing to visit my hometown Mohe .One day, They were walking into the Beijicun park which is surrounded by beautiful mountains, their story bagaun here...

“Do you call this area is a famous beauty spot? ”The wife said to her husband.

“You needn’t be so rude about it”. The husband answered as he looked into the distance of the beautiful mountains .The lady sat down on one of those natural wooden chairs in the park and talked to her husband .They had been in that park about two and one-half-hours,the husband was facing the green mountains and was keeping to employ the imagination to get some creative feeling, and then ,he took some pictures of the wonderful natural beauty.

“We musn't take some pitures we don’t need .”The wife remarked suddenly ,she regretted saying it almost at once.“You needn’t have said that.”The husband answered.“I needn’t remind you of that terrible wild fruits you had had in that forest yesterday” .

“I find them were purely natural food and natrual food were good for our health”

She said. “A woman can never have too many natural fruits.”

“And a man cannnot take too many beautiful pictures when he is in the wonderful forest .”

Finally ,They walked out of the forest park together.The husband still took some pictures and enjoy his memory about that beautiful mountains.

Do you think in my home town the forest was so beautiful ?Do you want to look at the pictures about my hometown? Let me tell you ,please open the website of our English Family 's Blog, there is a website that name is “China North Ppole -Film Exhibition”,I found it in this morning ,it was sent by our classmate Caoshui.Welcome there and look at it.

which was surrounded by beautiful mountains.

enjoyed his memory about that beautiful mountains.

Do you think in my home town the forest is so beautiful ?

Welcome there and have a look.

谢谢小精灵老师, 我终于看到我的帖子了. 谢谢你的帮助.

谢谢free2009， 我看过你的指点了， 看的很仔细，我马上改过了。 有时间多多指教哈， 谢谢。