<FONT size=3>很多论坛上都有转载“英语写作绝对有用200句/英语写作必背200句”。有些论坛更有四，五个同样的贴。有些贴是连有这个有如此惊人之序言：“这200句是我们写作教学组6年时间提举出来的国外经<B>典文章中的句子，是精华中的精华。</B>” 或是“这些句子是从近百篇雅思优秀作文中摘录下来并经<STRONG>反复推敲提炼而成的</STRONG>。” 或是“英语高级写作必背200句，为经典之作，不仅仅<STRONG>句型完美</STRONG>” <FONT color=#f70968><STRONG>是真的吗？答：不是。</STRONG></FONT></FONT>
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<FONT color=#000000>以 CET4/6 程度来说，这些句子可以说是“合格” 。但是说它们是“点睛之笔” ，“精华中的精华” ，“句型完美” ，就是有夸大之嫌。<o:p></o:p></FONT>
<FONT color=#000000>大家注意。这网上非常流行的贴子，<STRONG>其内错误甚多</STRONG>，请不要轻信这是“国外经典文章中的句子，是精华中的精华<B>。</B>“那就是骗人之言。这些句子用来应付考试作文或可以。它们的结构有很多是与英语国家教写英文作文背道而驰。</FONT>
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<FONT color=#000000>(网上有些说是源出新东方教材。是不是我不能肯定。我自六十年代开始年至今，一直在海外生活:读书，教书，以至退休。所以对中国补习学校的各们各派都不了了)</FONT>
<FONT color=#000000></FONT><FONT color=#000000>引：Dendis </FONT><a href="http://bbs.gter.net/bbs/forum.php?mod=viewthread&tid=355001&extra=page%3D1" target="_blank" ><FONT color=#000000>http://bbs.gter.net/bbs/forum.php?mod=viewthread&tid=355001&extra=page%3D1</FONT></A><FONT color=#000000> 另外需要提醒大家的是感觉这个里面有些可能是中国人自己写的句子，因为问过一些老外说里面的句子和词的用法有的是有问题的.<o:p></o:p></FONT>
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<FONT color=#000000>引: Yeti: 试修改‘英语写作绝对有用200句/英语写作必背200句引: "是从稍为修改过，比较好的学生作业上抽出来的。其内仍有很多错误" (看例子 1 to 100 连接: </FONT><a href="http://www.rainlane.com/dispbbs.asp?boardid=11&id=19210" target="_blank" ><FONT color=#000000>http://www.rainlane.com/dispbbs.asp?boardid=11&id=19210</FONT></A><FONT color=#000000>)<o:p></o:p></FONT>
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<FONT color=#000000>以下是从 “试修改‘英语写作绝对有用200句/英语写作必背200句’ 一至 100” </FONT><a href="http://www.rainlane.com/dispbbs.asp?boardid=11&id=19210" target="_blank" ><FONT color=#000000>http://www.rainlane.com/dispbbs.asp?boardid=11&id=19210</FONT></A><FONT color=#000000> 抽几个出来做例子<o:p></o:p></FONT>
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<FONT color=#000000>13 . A proper part-time job does not occupy students' <U>too much time.</U> In fact, it is unhealthy for them to spend <U>all of time</U> on their study. As an old saying goes: All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.<o:p></o:p></FONT>
<FONT color=#000000>修改为 A proper part-time job would not occupy too much of a student’s time. In fact, it is unhealthy for them to spend all their time on their studies. As an old saying goes: “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” (Please note this same quote is repeated in #79)<o:p></o:p></FONT>
<FONT color=#000000>26. The information I've collected over last few years leads me to believe that this knowledge may be less useful than most people think.<o:p></o:p></FONT>
<FONT color=#000000>修改为(The information…over the last few years…less useful than what most people think.)<o:p></o:p></FONT>
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<FONT color=#000000>27. Now, it is generally accepted that no college or university can educate its students by the time they <U>graduation</U>. 改为(--> by the time they graduate.)<o:p></o:p></FONT>
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<FONT color=#000000>44. It is <U>commonly</U> (改为 generally) accepted that no college or university can educate its students by the time they <U>graduation</U> (修改 graduate). (This is essentially the same as 27. My suspicion is that one is a partially corrected version from the same essay, with the second mistake missed.)<br><br></FONT><o:p></o:p>
<FONT color=#000000>32. Although many people claim that, along with the <U>rapidly</U> economic development, the number of people who use <U>bicycle</U> are decreasing and <U>bicycle</U> is bound to die out. The information I've collected over the recent years leads me to believe that <U>bicycle </U>will continue to play extremely important roles in modern society.<o:p></o:p></FONT>
<FONT color=#000000>修改: the rapidly economic development--> the rapid economic development; bicycle is bound to-->the bicycle is/bicycles are; that bicycle will continue--> the bicycle will/bicycles will.<br><br><o:p></o:p></FONT>
<FONT color=#000000>76. It is hard to imagine <U>a student</U> focusing <U>their</U> energy on textbook while other children are playing. 修改: ( a student …his…textbook)(students…their…textbooks)</FONT>
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<FONT color=#000000>With so many mistakes, how can one describe them as 精华中的精华。” "反复推敲提炼而成的" or "为经典之作，不仅仅句型完美”?</FONT>
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<FONT color=#000000>For more, please read: 试修改‘英语写作绝对有用200句/英语写作必背200句’ 一至90” (请尊重别人的劳动成果, 拜托请注明转贴，注明作者及出处) </FONT><a href="http://www.rainlane.com/dispbbs.asp?boardid=11&id=19210" target="_blank" ><FONT color=#000000>http://www.rainlane.com/dispbbs.asp?boardid=11&id=19210</FONT></A>
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<FONT color=#000000>你们若是想学习真正写作能力强母语人士的句子，一定要从真正写作能力强母语人士所写的文章里去找。例如这写作论坛上的贴子 (i)“有帮助写作的短段精读, 不断加新 ”</FONT><a href="http://www.rainlane.com/dispbbs.asp?boardID=8&ID=15724&page=1" target="_blank" ><FONT color=#000000>http://www.rainlane.com/dispbbs.asp?boardID=8&ID=15724&page=1</FONT></A><FONT color=#000000> (a subset is also available at the diandian.net) (ii) 从实例学写或翻译公司简介及其它翻译例子 </FONT><a href="http://www.rainlane.com/dispbbs.asp?boardID=11&ID=18461&star=2&page=1" target="_blank" ><FONT color=#000000>http://www.rainlane.com/dispbbs.asp?boardID=11&ID=18461&star=2&page=1</FONT></A><FONT color=#000000> (iii) Short and interesting news items </FONT><a href="http://www.rainlane.com/dispbbs.asp?boardID=11&ID=15393&page=1" target="_blank" ><FONT color=#000000>http://www.rainlane.com/dispbbs.asp?boardID=11&ID=15393&page=1</FONT></A><o:p></o:p>
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0cm 0cm 0pt">On the contrary, another “collection of sentences” is quite acceptable. “英文写作佳句300例”, not to be confused with the other one, can be found in many BBSes. You can search for it by using Baidu.com. Here is one on the diandian.net<o:p></o:p>
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