In 2008, three years after her across the Channel, the English strong swimming Debbie Hart, successfully swam across the Qiongzhou Channel for the first time. Though at first, Mr.Hart and his daughter were able to enjoy the view of sea. They soon ran into serious trouble. At one point, it seemed certain that their plan would stop. When Debbie was swimming, They found a shark was swimming towards them. she was shouting. "A shark, Daddy, help me." Mr.Hart said loudly:"Don't fright, your father is here." and told her that she swam to the other side of the boat. Mr. Hart acted quickly and took a gun had a fire to the shark. The shark was swimming away with hurt. Mr. Hart now knew that they would be able to reach the other coast, for there were no more sharks in front of them. Debbie was able to across over the sea area without difficulty.

When Debbie was swimming, they found a shark was swiming(omit) towards them.

told her that she must go to the other side of the boat.

Debbie was able to swim across over(omit) the sea area without difficulty.

just my own views

2# tezukazyunko

Debbie was able to across over(omit) the sea area without difficulty.

be able to后面应该跟动词，across不是动词，我觉得应该用swim across the sea area 或者cross over the sea area , over不能省略。

不知道对不对，供参考。

[1_29]sorry ,i just wanted to say"swim across"

i will correct !

2# tezukazyunko

Debbie was able to across over(omit) the sea area without difficulty.

be able to后面应该跟动词，across不是动词，我觉得应该用swim across the sea area 或者cross over the sea area , ov ...

shirley0086574 发表于 2009-3-19 23:46 [url=https://www.enfamily.cn/static/image/common/back.gif

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thanks,shirley,you're very nice!

thanks for your correction!i am always careless!it's so bad!

5# tezukazyunko

dear tezukazyunko, you are very nice, and l have always been thankful for your help.

you should not be so hard on yourself.

Don't fright->don't worry or don't panic

很认真呀

Thank you shirley0086574 .Thank you tezukazyunko. Thank your critique.