A big wooden box which was received by my mother is up for sale .my mother is going to sell it Because it is haunted .She told me that she could not go to sleep one night because she heard a strange noise coming from the box .The next morning, she found that the cover was opened by someone and the contents was moved .Though my mother was blocked it before she went to bed ,it was on in the morning .She also said that she had found one empty biscuits box and one waterless fruit can which the ghost must have eaten the night before .When I suggested that my three younger brother must have come in for a good meal .My mother shook her head. He has told her that he would not accept the food that was for our youngest sister even if she gave him personally.

A big wooden box which was received by my mother is up for sale .my mother is going to sell it Because it is haunted .She told me that she could not go to sleep one night（all night long?） because she heard a strange noise coming from the box .The next morning, she found that the cover was opened by someone and the contents was moved .Though my mother was blocked(delete WAS or change it into HAD?) it before she went to bed ,it was on in the morning .She also said that she had found one empty biscuits box and one waterless fruit can which the ghost must have eaten the night before .When I suggested（suggest作建议？那么后边要用虚拟证据，表暗示？感觉不怎么对） that my three younger（three younger brothers or three-year younger?） brother must have come in for a good meal .My mother shook her head. He has told her that he would not accept the food that was for our youngest sister even if she gave him personally.

My mother is going to sell it because it is haunted .

Though my mother had blocked it before she went to bed ,it was on in the morning

When I suggested that my three younger brothers may have come in for a good meal ,my mother shook her head.(must太肯定了，你也是推测啊！)just my view.

He has told her that he would not accept the food that was for our youngest sister even if she gave him personally.从这句来看，你的younger brother 没有三个是吗？难道，你先前想说的是3岁？

She also said that she had found one empty biscuits box and one waterless fruit can (omit)which the ghost must have eaten the night before .

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leec1120 您好， 说实话，您能耐心的看完我的“大作”， 我真的很感动。 我会认真分析你修改的地方， 纠正他们。 谢谢您。欢迎下次，还能帮助我哈。

tezukazyunko 你好， 你的指点我也认真的看了， my three younger brothers 这个我想表达：我的三弟， 我没会说清楚， 两位老师都没看懂。 对不起。然后， 我会改正的。 谢谢。