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Crush I (Original) 恋 (上)

发布者: puppy | 发布时间: 2009-2-9 11:53| 查看数: 2828| 评论数: 5|

本帖最后由 puppy 于 2009-2-9 11:57 编辑

2009年2月9日 Mon 天气 多云转晴

原创小说




Crush I (Original)



恋 (上)





Whatever from how people think of him, he is in the wrong place. Or at least, what he's doing for her is wrong. Love is the essential part of people's life. Everyone who who lives in this world needs love, by which passes their care to next generation from elder to younger, shows their concern from elder brothers to lads, expresses their attraction of hormone by feminity from wife to hubby and vice versa.



不管人们怎么看他,他总是错的。或者至少,他为她所做的一切都是错的。爱是生活中必不可缺少的一部分。这尘世上的纭纭众生离不开爱。爱在人间代代相传,传递关爱。爱构成了世上的骨肉情深。爱也使夫妻恩恩爱爱,相敬如宾,夫妻生活甜蜜美满。



Love, however, the term that is only like and concern literally came up with a new explanation at a time when she came to the hosptial for his broken leg.

不过,当她因为他摔伤了腿去医院看望他时。爱,这一全然用来表示关爱的词突然间---有了全新的含义。



What is beauty? He asked himself when first he saw her. Slender, quiet, mild tempered, a distinct girl he ever met with as he felt about her at the first sight. The most endearing and fascinating girl he's ever met since he left school couple of years. What attracts him most is her intangible but doubly-felt grace penetrating every part of his skin and stimulating his dim sense toward love long covered ago.



美丽是什么?他第一次见到他时,这样问自己。第一眼看到她时,他就被她的纤柔,恬静,温柔而深深吸引。因为他觉得这是他见到的最为与众不同的女孩。也是他毕业多年来最为令他着迷的女孩,真是惹人怜爱。尤其令他最为痴迷的是从这女孩身上透出的一种无所不在的典雅气息深深地渗透着他身上的每一寸肌肤,刺激着他长久以来埋藏在心底的那层朦胧的眷恋---爱。



"I work for her, I like being with her, enjoying every second accompanying her and every word she said to me." He thinks. 6-year-older than him, she is the palpable person he cares the most and shows his willingness to give everything he can do for her's sake. "I treat her like my elder sister, a care-worthy sister I would like to plunge all my emotion other than my parents believes him, with his heart throbbing, however, a beat he didn't realize out of a sub-conscious, as well as fast growing and strenghening feeling that is called love.



他这样想到: 我为她而工作,我喜欢和她在一起。我享受陪伴在她身边的每时每刻,珍惜她给我的点点滴滴。她年长他六岁,但很显然她已成为了她最为关爱的人。为了她他愿意不惜一切为她做自己力所能及的事。她是我的姐姐,我真的很珍惜她,除我父母之外我想她是对我最重要的人,我愿为她赴汤蹈火,在所不惜。不过,他的心却怦怦跳了起来。他或许没有意识到他已为此怦然心动。一种强烈的感觉在他内心迅速悄然蔓延开来,是爱。



He does it as what he's thinking, doing anything he can in every possible way. Going along with the conventional wisdom a proper love is expected to be financially and physically matched (Seemingly more or less) , people argue that the marriage is after all a rational mini society based on mutual satisfaction and understanding. So it goes to him who bears in mind a 6-year-old span is not the most distance seperating her from him, however, a lady with a financially compelling hubby and a cute 5 year olds is only the dream he can chase after.



他确实做了他自己承诺的东西。他尽一切努力做自己能做的事。人们长久以来总是认为所谓的爱情要建立在门当户对,郎才女貌的基础上。多少应该是这样。毕竟一个完美的婚姻是要建立在相互理解的和谐氛围中,这样才能成为一个美好的小家庭。尽管他知道姐姐大他六岁,也早已为人妻。夫家既强势条件也很好。夫妻俩还育有一个可爱的5岁儿子。只是,即使如此,他依旧执拗地追逐着她。







To be continued...



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puppy 发表于 2009-2-9 11:58:10
本帖最后由 puppy 于 2009-2-9 12:07 编辑

Commentary,

It's the first post since I have something original 2 and half years ago.This time is about the love affair between people.As everyone has their own idea about what true love is, whether it's true or false.The post dwells from total different angle to define what the love should be, and maybe you can to some extent find some profiles in the daily life, if carefully.

2年多来我第一次用英语写一点原创的东西。因为前些时候忙着考高级口译,简直是复习的T_T。。。自己也知道。不过还好,总算过了,庆祝一下~.~。这次的文章是关于爱情的。每个人都有自己对与爱的诠释,无所谓对或错。本文从另外一个角度解答了爱的另一种形式。或许人们可以从生活中或所或少找到些须这样的影子,仔细找的话。每段后附有我自己的译文,仅供参考。如有谬误之处,还望指正。
puppy 发表于 2009-2-9 12:01:44
As I did struggle for my advanced course of interpretation last Nov and luckily I got that certificate with which it's expected to better my resume for the job hunting in a higher position.

Thanks for David's everlasting support for me as the admin of this forum that I'm supposed to do something to show my due contribution.

And that post is my origianl but relatively a prototype from life more or less comes in my post.I hope my friends will enjoy it and with my own translation for better understanding.
CalmSky 发表于 2009-2-9 15:20:26
very nice and neat writing.

congrats for the certificate you've got on advanced course of interpretation.
芥末膏 发表于 2009-2-9 15:39:29
Wow... Puppy is back?! What a wonderful work. Learning from what you write is my honor. Wish you a happy Chinese Lantern Day.
leec1120 发表于 2009-2-9 15:52:38
a wonderful article~~looking forward your next writing
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