http://www.tudou.com/v/ILxtBBD5sZE

very good.

不错啊，有几个词注意一下：Bonneville，world是读错了。

挺棒

谢谢大家关心，特别感谢Katy提出的帮助！！1

your pronunciation is very clear, very good!

Thanks melodyyan, urs is good too, and u were more composed while u reading, what what i should learn from u.

I am always a little nervous while i perform in public, though it's not in real public... andit's really a good way to practise reading, especially for kids. it ll encourage them a lot if they get conferred on a Shining medal.

语感感觉很好哦