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一、卸下重负，一步晴空

阅读下面材料， 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段， 使之构成一篇完整的短文。

With every step I took, my legs shook like a baby deer's, their power gone after climbing the rocky path for hours. My mind was full of bad thoughts. You are too heavy and weak and silly for even trying this impossible climb. The worries had begun long before when I first joined this trip, back when I was still happy about six months without drinking. My advisor had said this might be too hard, but I wanted to show I could change my life.

Now, standing on this dangerous mountain side, all that hope seemed foolish. The thin air made breathing difficult, and my uncomfortable shoes already hurt my feet. I watched jealously as the other twenty-eight climbers, mostly skilled walkers much younger than me, moved up the path easily. Their happy calls to each other only made me feel more alone.

During our first break, one leader quietly talked to me. “Your bag is too heavy,” he said, looking at my full backpack. But it wasn't just the bag's weight slowing me down. It was years of mistakes, broken words, and lost friendships that I'd stupidly thought I could forget at the mountain's bottom.

As night came at camp, I stayed awake hearing the others sleep, my body hurting from tiredness. The freezing cold made my old knee problem worse, and whenever I tried to rest, I imagined falling down the rocky hill. Now, just an hour into the final climb, my eyes couldn't see clearly from tiredness and held-back tears. The leader watched me, looking worried, but I couldn't face him.

Sarah, the trip planner, appeared like a dream in the early morning darkness. When I weakly said I wanted to stop, she didn't answer right away. Instead, she looked at me carefully, making me want to disappear. Finally, she spoke, her voice clear over the loud wind: “The man who wrote to me months ago spoke about making life better on his own. Is that man really giving up now?” Her question hit me hard.

注意：

（1） 续写词数应为 150 个左右；

（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Sarah's words echoed in my mind as I forced myself to take another step.________

When I finally reached the summit, the rising sun painted the sky gold.____________

01

READING

Characters: The narrator (a man in recovery, battling self-doubt and physical limitations); Sarah (the perceptive and challenging trip planner).

Conflict: The internal conflict between the narrator's desire to prove his transformation and the overwhelming weight of his past failures and current physical suffering, which makes him want to quit.

Theme: True transformation and self-forgiveness are earned through persevering through struggle, not by escaping it.

02

THINKING

Given sentence 1: Sarah's words echoed in my mind as I forced myself to take another step.

衔接句1: 她的质问像一记惊雷，震散了我脑中的迷雾，让我重新想起了此行的初衷。

过渡句1: 这一步迈出后，身体的疼痛依旧，但内心的某个枷锁似乎松动了。

衔接句2: 我不再去想最终的峰顶，而是将全部精神集中于眼前的每一步，呼吸与步伐逐渐找到了共同的节奏。

Given sentence 2: When I finally reached the summit, the rising sun painted the sky gold.

衔接句3: 泪水无声地滑落，但这一次不再是出于痛苦，而是因为一种前所未有的释然与平静。

过渡句2: 站在群山之巅，回望那條蜿蜒而上的艰险路途，我忽然理解了這趟旅程的真正意义。

主旨句: I hadn't conquered the mountain, but the mountain had helped me conquer the shadow of my former self.

03

WRITING:

刻画内心挣扎与决心：

一股被遗忘的力量，从疲惫不堪的身体深处涌出。

A forgotten strength welled up from the depths of my exhausted body.

Sarah 的质问像一把锤子敲醒了我，脑海中不断交织着放弃的念头和对改变生活的渴望，最终，改变的决心压过了懦弱。

Sarah's question struck me like a hammer, with the thought of giving up and the desire to change my life intertwining in my mind. Eventually, the determination to change overcame my cowardice.

描绘身体感受与环境互动：

黎明的微风轻柔地拂过我被汗水浸透的脸颊，仿佛是一种鼓励。

The dawn breeze brushed gently against my sweat-soaked face, feeling like an encouragement.

表达情感突破与主题升华：

站在山顶的那一刻，所有的自我怀疑和过去的阴霾都烟消云散，我终于明白，真正的强大不是从不软弱，而是在软弱时依然选择坚持。

At the moment I stood on the summit, all self-doubt and the haze of the past vanished. I finally realized that true strength is not never being weak, but choosing to persist even when weak.

望着金色的日出，我感受到一种前所未有的释然，过去的错误不再是负担，而是提醒我珍惜当下、勇敢前行的警钟。

Looking at the golden sunrise, I felt an unprecedented sense of relief. Past mistakes were no longer a burden, but an alarm to remind me to cherish the present and move forward bravely.

构建生动的场景感（细节动作/环境烘托）：

脚下的群山笼罩在淡金色的晨曦中，沉默地见证着我的胜利。

The mountains below, shrouded in the pale golden dawn, stood in silent witness to my victory.

我颤抖着伸出手，触摸着身边冰凉的岩石，让我更加清醒——我真的做到了，我登上了山顶。

I tremblingly stretched out my hand and touched the cold rock beside me, which made me more awake—I really did it, and I climbed to the summit.

优秀范文

Possible version one:

Sarah's words echoed in my mind as I forced myself to take another step. The cold wind cut through my clothes, but her belief in me warmed my heart. I focused on putting one foot in front of the other, counting each movement. With each movement, my confidence grew. Though my legs still ached, the pain became my motivation. The guide beside me nodded approvingly when I passed the next resting spot without stopping. Looking up at the winding path ahead, I realized the summit was closer than I thought.

When I finally reached the summit,the rising sun painted the sky gold. Tears filled my eyes as I looked at the incredible view—clouds floating below us like a white ocean.Sarah came over and put a hand on my shoulder.“I knew you could do it,” she said simply. At that moment, I understood something important. The mountain hadn't changed; I had. As we took group photos, smiling with windburned faces, I realized this journey wasn’t just about climbing a mountain. It was about learning that our greatest limitations are often the ones we place on ourselves.

Possible version two:

Sarah's words echoed in my mind as I forced myself to take another step. Exhausted but determined, I moved forward, the thought of changing my life burning in my mind. With my legs shaking and my knee aching, I managed to take another step. A heavy weight of tiredness and fear pressed on my chest, making it hard to breathe. No matter when I wanted to give up, I could clearly hear Sarah's words lingering in my ears, hitting my soul like a rainstorm. Gripping the icy rock tightly, I pushed myself forward. I whispered to myself, I won't disappoint the man who decided to change six months ago.

When I finally reached the summit, the rising sun painted the sky gold. Joy and pride filled my heart as I stood at the top, just like the warm sunshine wrapping around me. A sense of achievement flooded over me as the leader hugged me tightly and Sarah smiled at me. After that, bathing in the bright sunshine, I thought the moment was my 'golden hour' when I finally shed tears for a new self. It was the moment when I could put my heavy bag down and take a sigh of relief. Never would I have forgiven myself if I had given up. Far away, the bright sun climbed higher, spreading its golden light. In my heart, all the past mistakes and regrets turned into courage and hope for a new beginning.

24 班叶慧琳

Possible version three:

Sarah's words echoed in my mind as I forced myself to take another step. Despite the tremendous pain in my knees, I clenched my teeth and pushed forward, each step a battle against the mountain. The promise I made six months ago lingered in my mind like the hillside haze, constantly pushing me to fight the pain and keep moving. With the faint morning light falling upon us, the sun rose slowly from the east, bringing a sense of boundless hope. Although my backpack was still heavy, there was a touch of lightness surging in my mind. Sarah offered me a helping hand and said, 'You can do this. Just one step at a time.' Close at hand was the summit that once seemed unreachable.

When I finally reached the summit, the rising sun painted the sky gold. Delighted and relaxed, I gazed at the sea of rolling golden clouds and took a deep breath. As I recalled the arduous journey of climbing the mountain, I once again remembered the scene when I first vowed to quit drinking. At this moment, all the efforts paid off. Sarah looked at me with a relieved expression. We hugged excitedly, celebrating the victory of our climb. Looking back at the mountain path, I found it was no longer a torturous memory of the past, but a stage symbolizing a hopeful new life ahead.

24 班朱奕帆

一份午餐，双向温暖

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

It was a typical busy noon at the downtown fast-food spot. The smell of sizzling patties and crispy fries lingered (弥漫) in the air, and the place was packed with folks rushing to grab a quick meal. I’d just gotten off a long morning at work, and my stomach was empty as I finally reached the front of the line and got my order - a burger, fries, and a cold drink.

As I set the tray (托盘) down on a small table by the window, I glanced over and saw two firefighters in the corner. Their uniforms were heavy with faint spots, like they'd just stepped away from a smoky scene, and their boots still held a hint of damp from the morning dew. They stood in the back of the line, shoulders relaxed but eyes tired.

I was just about to pick up my burger - the cheese melted perfectly - when a loud, sharp siren (警报) cut through the noise of the restaurant. The two firefighters froze for half a second, and then moved. No hesitation, no exchange of words - just muscle memory. One grabbed his helmet off the nearby counter, the other adjusted his radio on his shoulder, and they turned toward the door, their steps quickening. I watched them go, and my fork paused mid-air.

My empty stomach served as a quiet reminder of how long I'd waited for this meal. I'd stood in that line for 15 minutes, my feet aching from the morning's work. Giving them my lunch meant I would have to wait again - maybe another line, maybe my break slipping away faster. I bit my lip, staring at the tray. Then I thought of their uniforms, the spots, the way they'd act upon hearing the siren like it was a call they couldn't ignore. They didn't get to pause for a meal when emergencies hit. They'd probably go hours without eating, running from one call to the next.

注意：

1. 续写词数应为150左右；

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

My hesitation melted away.________________________

I went back to the counter, only to find the manager was waiting for me._________________

01

READING：【文本分析】

Characters: The narrator (an observant and empathetic office worker); the two firefighters (dedicated public servants); the manager (a supportive figure).

Conflict: The internal struggle between the narrator's immediate physical need (hunger) and the moral impulse to perform an act of kindness for the selfless firefighters.

Theme: A selfless act of kindness can create a ripple effect, transforming a simple moment into a testament of community and human warmth.

02

THINKING: 【思路构思】

Given sentence 1: My hesitation melted away.

衔接句1: （刻画内心决定）一个清晰的念头取代了所有犹豫：他们比我更需要这顿饭。

过渡句1: （描述果断动作）我迅速拿起我那份还未动过的餐盘，转身向他们离去的方向追去。

衔接句2: （构建场景）我在餐厅门口追上了他们，他们正准备登上那辆已启动的消防车。

Given sentence 2: I went back to the counter, only to find the manager was waiting for me.

衔接句3: （描绘人物与细节）他脸上带着温和的微笑，手里已经拿着一个崭新的、装得满满的餐盘。

过渡句2: （解释原因并推进情节）他告诉我，他透过玻璃窗看到了我刚才所做的一切。

主旨句: A single selfless act can ignite a chain reaction of warmth, reminding us that compassion is the most nourishing meal of all.

03

WRITING: 【语言储备】

1 . 刻画内心活动与决定

意识到他们的奉献远比我短暂的饥饿重要，一股坚定的决心取代了所有犹豫。

Aware of their dedication far outweighing my temporary hunger, a firm resolution replaced all hesitation.

正是他们疲惫不堪却随时准备出发的样子，最终促使我做出了决定。

It was their exhausted yet ready-to-go appearance that finally prompted my decision.

2 . 描述果断动作与场景

我端起托盘，转身推开餐厅的门，朝着消防车快步走去。

I picked up the tray, turned around, pushed the door open, and walked briskly towards the fire truck.

消防车的警灯闪烁着红光，我毫不犹豫地将餐盘递了过去。

With the fire truck's lights flashing red, I handed over the tray without a second thought.

3 . 表达互动与情感交流

我递过去的不仅仅是一份午餐，更是一份发自内心的感激。

What I handed over was not just a lunch, but a heartfelt gratitude.

他眼中闪烁的惊讶与感激之情，是如此明显。

So evident were the surprise and gratitude shimmering in his eyes.

4 . 构建温暖的结局与感悟

经理的笑容像一缕阳光，瞬间驱散了我心中所有的犹豫和疲惫。

The manager's smile, like a ray of sunshine, instantly dispelled all my hesitation and weariness.

一种深刻的领悟涌上我的心头：善意是这个世界上最强大的力量。

A profound understanding washed over me: kindness is the most powerful force in the world.

优秀范文

Possible version one:

官方范文：

My hesitation melted away. My hands were a little shaky, but I walked over to them quickly, catching up just as they reached the door. “Wait!” I shouted. They turned, surprised, their helmets still in their hands. “Here,” I held out the tray, “You need this more than I do. I’m not in a rush. But you are.” They thanked me repeatedly and took the lunch. I stood by the door, watching them run toward the fire truck and their uniforms fading away, with a sense of relief lingering in my chest.

I went back to the counter, only to find the manager was waiting for me. “It was really nice of you.” she grinned. When I reached for my wallet to pay for the new burger, she shook her head. “Kindness like that shouldn’t go unrewarded.” A wave of warmth washed over me and tears nearly blurred my vision. Sitting back down with my fresh meal, I took a bite, and it tasted better than anything else. That day, I didn't just feed two people, but joined a circle of goodness, the kind that makes the busy, messy world softer.

Possible version two:

My hesitation melted away. With a determined look on my face, I picked up my tray which was full with delicious food, and stepped towards the door. I walked as quickly as I could while holding the tray carefully, making sure the food won't fall down. Hardly had I caught up them happily when I offered them my meal. At the sight of the sudden fantastic gift, the two firefighters were too moved to say a word. With earnest gratitude, they gave me a tight hug, thanking me again and again. Beaming them a radiant smile, I felt a warm current flooded over my body, bringing me a sense of well-being.

I went back to the counter, only to find the manager was waiting for me. No sooner had he spotted me then he said that he had noticed my act of kindness and decided to give me a free meal. Never in my wildest dreams had I anticipated that such a small act could bring so big a surprise. I extended my gratitude to the manager and sat down to enjoy the burger. The sun was peeking through the clouds, casting a warm glow over the world. At the moment, I heard a voice echoing in my ears "Roses given, fragrance in hand". That episode, engraved in my mind permanently, served as an enlightenment that everything paled into insignificance compared with kindness.

Possible version three:

My hesitation melted away. “Wait!” My voice cut through the air that quieted down due to the sharp siren. The two firefighters turned around. I quickly gathered the food from the table and rushed to them, placing it into their hands as they looked surprised. “Maybe you need this,” I said nervously. Due to nervousness, my hand involuntarily clenched the packaging bag and my voice trembled a little. “Please eat this quickly.” I clearly saw their shocked and excited expressions. Because of the tight time, they had no time to refuse. After saying thanks, they ran towards the source of the siren with the food. As their figures faded away, a warm feeling of respect filled my heart. Then, I decided to return to the counter to get another meal.

I went back to the counter, only to find the manager was waiting for me. His kind and approving smile made me feel unsure what to do. “Miss, because of your generous act just now, we are willing to offer you a lunch for free.” I took the lunch and firmly put forward my request: “Could you deliver lunches to those firefighters?” The manager readily agreed, and other customers joined in one by one. Reflecting on this, perhaps when the hurried backs of two firefighters disappeared, I was not the only one moved: These unsung heroes were running desperately for our safe lives. Even so tired, they were on standby at any time. So on that ordinary noon, they protected us, and we showed our gratitude in return, proving that kindness is always rewarded.

24 班王怡宁

Possible version four:

My hesitation melted away. Deep down, I knew what I had to do. I had to make things right. With newfound determination and a sense of belonging (情绪变化➕with复合结构), I grabbed the tray, moved swiftly through the crowded tables, and pushed open the glass door. (动作链描写) The cool air outside hit my face as I scanned for the firefighters. (环境描写➕动作) I spotted them just as they were getting into their truck. "Wait!" I called out, hurrying towards them. (伴随状语) They turned, their tired faces showing surprise. (动作➕独立主格) "Here," I said, out of breath while holding out the tray. "You need this more than I do." The taller one started to shake his head, but then he looked at me and understood that I really meant it. He gave me a tired but grateful smile. "Thank you, really," he said, his voice low but full of gratitude. (说的时候➕独立主格心情感受)

I went back to the counter, only to find the manager was waiting for me. He had a warm smile registering on his face. "I saw what you did out there," he said, his voice filled with approval. (说➕独立主格结构)"That was a wonderful thing to do. Your lunch is free today. We need more people like you." A wave of warmth spread through my chest, chasing away the last of my hunger pains. (无灵主语，这里用得很活)As I sat down with a fresh, hot meal minutes later, I realized the burger tasted better than any I'd had before---not because of the flavor, but because kindness had seasoned (给…调味道) it. The siren had interrupted my lunch, but it had given me something much better: a strong reminder that a small act of kindness really matters, and it can warm not just one heart, but many.

从“手忙脚乱”到“温馨满屋”

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。

It was the last day before moving into the new house. Mr. and Mrs. Martin wanted to make it warm and lovely, so they decided to do some decorating themselves. That morning, Mrs. Martin stood at the door, reminding her busy husband. “Don’t climb too high, don’t move heavy boxes, and don’t forget to rest,” she said again and again, before she eventually headed out to buy curtains.

Earlier, their daughter Emily had called. She said she was tied up with her job in another city, but promised, “Don’t worry, we’ll celebrate together soon.” The couple missed her, of course, but they smiled at each other and agreed it would be meaningful to get the new home ready, a warm welcome awaiting their daughter’s arrival.

Mr. Martin waved goodbye to his wife and went back to his decorating work, confident and full of energy at first. But soon the living room turned into a battlefield. Boxes, nails, a hammer and screwdrivers lay everywhere. Paint splashed onto the floor, and the wall looked like a child’s drawing. And several photo frames were scattered on the ground.

“A spider!” Mr. Martin climbed onto a shaky stool to chase it away — his wife hated those things — but instead he slipped and broke a photo frame. “Ouch, my back!” he groaned, sweat trickling down his forehead. He began to wonder whether he was really able to do this job alone.

Then came a sharp smell from the kitchen. “Oh no, my cake!” Mr. Martin dragged himself to open the oven. The cake, which he had planned to surprise his wife with, was now nothing but a hard black rock. He stared at it, shaking his head. “Should I admit the mess? Or pretend nothing happened?” he whispered. Suddenly, the door creaked open. Mrs. Martin stepped inside with the new curtains in her arms.

续写要求：

1. 续写词数应为150左右。2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Paragraph 1: For a moment, Mrs. Martin stood frozen.

Paragraph 2: With the new curtains finally in place, the doorbell rang.

01

READING: 【文本分析】

Characters: Mr. Martin (a well-meaning but somewhat clumsy husband trying to handle things on his own); Mrs. Martin (a caring wife who returns to an unexpected scene); Emily (the daughter, an implied presence).

Conflict: Mr. Martin’s internal conflict between wanting to surprise and please his family with his efforts, and the embarrassing reality of having created a chaotic mess and failed in his attempts.

Theme: True warmth and meaning of a home lie not in flawless decoration, but in shared effort, honest communication, and the unconditional love that embraces imperfections.

02

THINKING: 【思路构思】

Given sentence 1: For a moment, Mrs. Martin stood frozen.

衔接句1: （描述所见与第一反应）她的目光扫过如战场般的客厅、地上的碎相框，最后落在厨房里那盘焦黑的“岩石”上。

过渡句1: （刻画情绪转折与互动）震惊迅速被担忧取代，快步走向正试图藏起失败蛋糕的丈夫。（推动情节：丈夫的反应）面对妻子的目光，Martin先生决定放弃掩饰，选择坦白。

衔接句2: 她轻轻放下窗帘，嘴角浮起一个“我早就猜到”的笑意。

Given sentence 2: With the new curtains finally in place, the doorbell rang.

衔接句3: （营造悬念与动作）夫妇俩困惑地对视了一眼，想不出这时候会有谁来。

过渡句2: （揭示惊喜与高潮）门一打开，门外站着的正是他们朝思暮想的女儿Emily。

主旨句: What turns a house into a home is not flawless decoration, but the laughter that echoes through every flaw./Home is not defined by a spotless space, but by the love and tolerance that turn messes into sweet memories.

03

WRITING: 【语言储备】

1 . 刻画内心活动与决定 (运用无灵主语句、形容词短语放句首)

（形容词短语放句首 + 无灵主语句）

既尴尬又愧疚，一句坦诚的“对不起，我把事情搞砸了”从Martin先生口中说出。

Embarrassed and guilty, a frank “I’m sorry, I made a mess of things” escaped Mr. Martin’s lips.

（强调句）

正是妻子眼中那份毫无责备的关切，让他悬着的心终于落了下来。

It was the complete absence of blame in his wife’s concerned eyes that finally eased his anxiety.

(主语从句)

That his wife showed understanding rather than blame made him determined to tidy up the "loving mess" with her.

2 . 描述动作与场景 (运用动作链、独立主格结构)

（动作链）

她放下手中的袋子，绕过地上的杂物，轻轻扶住了丈夫的胳膊。

She put down her bag, stepped around the clutter on the floor, and gently took hold of her husband’s arm.

她放下窗帘，快步走到厨房拿出清洁布，蹲下身就开始擦拭地上的漆渍，动作干脆利落。

She put down the curtains, hurried to the kitchen to get a cleaning cloth, squatted down and started wiping the paint stains on the floor, her movements quick and neat.

（独立主格结构）

工具被逐一归位，破碎的相框用胶带小心粘好，整个客厅渐渐恢复整洁，阳光透过窗户洒了进来。

Tools put back in place one by one and the broken photo frame carefully taped, the living room gradually regained its order, sunlight streaming through the window.

蛋糕失败品被摆在桌子中央，两人看着它，突然忍不住一起笑了起来。

The failed cake sitting in the middle of the table, the two of them looked at it and suddenly burst into laughter together.

3 . 表达互动与情感交流 (运用主语从句、倒装句)

（主语从句）

“我需要的不是一个完美的房子，”她说，“而是我们在一起，即使是在这一团糟里。”

“What I need,” she said, “is not a perfect house, but us being together, even in this mess.”

（倒装句）

他脸上如释重负的笑容和眼角的细纹，是如此的温暖。

So warm was the relieved smile and the crinkles at the corners of his eyes.

4 . 构建温暖的结局与感悟 (运用修辞手法、介词短语开头)

（修辞手法：比喻）

女儿的出现，像最后一块拼图，让这个尚显凌乱的家瞬间变得完整而温馨。

Their daughter’s arrival, like the final piece of a puzzle, instantly made the still-messy house feel complete and warm.

（介词短语开头 + 无灵主语句）

在三人共同整理房间的笑声中，一种无可替代的幸福感充满了整个空间。

With laughter filling the air as the three tidied up together, an irreplaceable sense of happiness permeated the space.

伴着女儿的笑声和厨房里新烤蛋糕的甜香，这个刚刚收拾妥当的家，成为了世界上最温暖的港湾。

With his daughter’s laughter and the sweet smell of a newly baked cake from the kitchen, the newly tidied house became the warmest harbor in the world.

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Possible version one:

For a moment, Mrs. Martin stood frozen.Her eyes widened at the messy living room—paint splatters on the floor, scattered tools, and the broken photo frame. When she spotted the blackened cake in the oven, she let out a soft sigh. Mr. Martin lowered his head in shame, ready for criticism.Unexpectedly, Mrs. Martin walked over and gently touched his back. "Are you hurt?" she asked worriedly. Then she smiled, "We're decorating a home, not building a palace. Mess is part of the fun." Together, they started cleaning up, with Mr. Martin sharing his clumsy attempts to chase the spider.

With the new curtains finally in place, the doorbell rang. It was Emily, holding a big bunch of flowers. She stepped inside and gasped, "Wow, it feels like home already!" Her eyes fell on the slightly messy but warm room, and then on the black cake. Mr. Martin scratched his head awkwardly, but Emily laughed and said, "I love it—it’s full of your love." That evening, they ordered takeout, talked and laughed while arranging photo frames. The messy living room, once a battlefield, had turned into the warmest corner of their new home.

Possible version two

For a moment, Mrs. Martin stood frozen. Her eyes swept over the messy living room — tools scattered everywhere, paint splatters on the wall, and a broken photo frame lying on the floor. Finally, they fell on Mr. Martin, who was clutching a black burnt cake with sweat dripping down his forehead. Overwhelmed by guilt, Mr. Martin lowered his head, unable to meet her eyes. However, Mrs. Martin’s frown soon softened. She put down the curtains and walked over quickly. "Are you hurt?" she asked, gently rubbing his back. It was the concern rather than blame in her voice that made his tense shoulders relax. Together, they started tidying up, tools put back and the wall wiped clean.

With the new curtains finally in place, the doorbell rang. The warm yellow curtains cast a soft light over the room, making it cozy instantly. Mr. Martin, whose hands were still stained with paint, rushed to open the door. A big smile spread across his face when he saw Emily standing outside with a suitcase. "Surprise!" she cried, throwing herself into her mother’s arms. The afterglow of the setting sun embraced the house, and the sweet smell of a new cake from the kitchen filled the air. Home is not defined by a spotless space, but by the love that turns messes into sweet memories.

AI代码，双向理解

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

This time, Mira wasn't asking the AI to polish her essays. Instead, she typed a question that had been pressing on her heart for weeks:

“ Why won 't Grandma eat properly? ”

It was early January. After finishing her exams, Mira had returned to her hometown to spend some quiet days with her grandmother. The old woman had once been a legend—she'd worked as a tailor(裁缝), made dresses for half the village and saved enough to open her own shop.

Time had taken its toll. Now her eyesight had dimmed, her fingers trembled, but she was still that legendary woman who lived on her own terms. Whenever someone ladled (用勺子舀) soup into her bowl, she would push it away, murmuring, "I don't need it. Save it for yourselves." Every meal played out the same way. It broke Mira's heart.

Actually, the family was doing well. There was plenty of food, plenty of love. So why did eating—a simple, everyday act—seem like a burden to her?

She tried reasoning with her, but the more she talked, the more Grandma resisted. Until one day, in a moment of frustration, she blurted out, "Grandma, you make me so sad when you act like this." The old woman froze, then sighed. "I'm over seventy. I won't be around much longer. It doesn't matter how I eat."

The words cut deep. Mira thought about taking her to a psychologist (心理医生) but knew she'd refuse. So she turned to an old companion, the AI.

The response came quickly. Grandma was refusing food because she felt like she no longer had a place in the family. The AI offered suggestions: Help her feel secure and needed.

注 意 ：

(1)续写词数应为150左右；

(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

With AI's assistance,Mira began her plan. _____________

As meals became less of a battle, Mira decided to relight the sparkle in grandmother's eyes._____

01

READING: 【文本分析】

Characters: Mira (a caring and determined granddaughter); Grandma (a once-independent, now struggling with loss of purpose elderly woman).

Conflict: The struggle between Mira’s desire to care for her grandmother and Grandma’s deep-seated feeling of being a burden, which manifests as refusing food.

Theme: True caregiving involves restoring not just physical health, but a person's sense of purpose, dignity, and belonging.

02

THINKING: 【思路构思】

Given sentence 1: With AI's assistance, Mira began her plan.

衔接句1: 她不再劝说奶奶“多吃点”，而是开始向她“求助”。

过渡句1: 她从最简单的任务开始，比如在做饭时特意询问奶奶某种调料应该放多少。

衔接句2: 米拉意识到，奶奶需要的不只是“好好吃饭”，更是重拾过去的价值与光彩。

Given sentence 2: As meals became less of a battle, Mira decided to relight the sparkle in grandmother’s eyes.

衔接句3: 她翻出了奶奶旧工具箱里一块美丽的丝绸，并提出了一个具体的请求。

过渡句2: 这个请求不是为了怜悯，而是真诚地需要奶奶独一无二的技艺。

主旨句: Sometimes, the deepest hunger is not for food, but for purpose; and the most nourishing act is to invite someone back to the table of life, not just to eat, but to contribute.

03

WRITING: 【语言储备】

刻画内心挣扎与决心：

米拉既担心直接劝说会激怒奶奶，又迫切想改变奶奶拒食的状态，内心反复纠结后，决定按AI的建议一步步来。

Torn between the fear of irritating Grandma with direct persuasion and the eagerness to change her refusal to eat, Mira hesitated repeatedly before deciding to follow the AI’s suggestions step by step.

奶奶看着米拉笨拙的样子，心中既涌起一丝暖意，又因自己年迈无用而羞愧，最终还是忍不住伸出手帮忙。

Watching Mira’s clumsy attempts, Grandma felt a trace of warmth mixed with shame at her own uselessness; eventually, she couldn’t help but reach out to assist.

描绘身体感受与环境互动：

指尖触碰到熟悉的棉布纹理时，奶奶颤抖的手指微微一顿，仿佛瞬间找回了过去做裁缝时的从容。

When her fingertips touched the familiar texture of the cotton cloth, Grandma’s trembling fingers paused slightly, as if instantly regaining the calm she had when she was a tailor.

阳光透过窗户洒在餐桌上，映着奶奶慢慢咀嚼食物的侧脸，米拉心中的石头终于落了地，周身都感到温暖。

The sun streamed through the window onto the dining table, illuminating Grandma’s side face as she chewed slowly. A weight lifted from Mira’s heart, and warmth coursed through her body.

表达情感突破与主题升华：

当奶奶笑着夸米拉学得快时，米拉突然明白，让奶奶开心的不是丰盛的饭菜，而是被需要的感觉。

When Grandma smiled and praised Mira for learning quickly, it suddenly dawned on Mira that what made Grandma happy was not the abundant food, but the feeling of being needed.

看着奶奶重新拿起针线的样子，米拉深刻体会到，亲情不是单方面的付出，而是彼此支撑、相互照亮。

Watching Grandma pick up the needle and thread again, Mira deeply realized that kinship is not one-sided giving, but mutual support and illumination.

构建生动的场景感（细节动作/环境烘托）：

米拉故意把菜洗得乱七八糟，奶奶皱着眉走过来，接过菜篮，熟练地摘掉黄叶、择去老根，动作里满是过去的干练。

Mira deliberately washed the vegetables in a mess. Grandma frowned, walked over, took the vegetable basket, and skillfully plucked off the yellow leaves and old roots, her movements full of the efficiency of the past.

灯光下，奶奶戴着老花镜，手把手教米拉穿针，两人的影子在墙上紧紧靠在一起，满室都是温馨的气息。

Under the light, Grandma put on her reading glasses and taught Mira to thread the needle hand in hand, with their shadows leaning closely together on the wall, filling the room with a warm atmosphere.

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Possible version one:

With Al's assistance, Mira began her plan. First, she worked with AI to create customized recipes for Grandma, accounting for her age-related digestive issues and past preferences to make nutritious, easy-to-swallow dishes. Meanwhile, following AI's suggestion to make Grandma feel valued, the family started to shower her with more attention—sitting with her at meals, chatting warmly, expressing appreciation and encouraging her to eat. As days passed, Grandma began to sense the genuine care and importance the family placed on her. Gradually, the once-stubborn resistance to food faded away.

As meals became less of a battle, Mira decided to relight the sparkle in grandmother's eyes. "It's time to make her feel needed," Mira thought, appealing to Grandma's pride as the village's best tailor and asking her to make a special outfit for a school event. Grandma's eyes lit up immediately, a spark of the old force she once had returning. Mira and Grandma spent hours crafting together Grandma patiently guiding her through measuring. cutting, and sewing, sharing stories of her tailor days. This interaction restored Grandma's self - worth, strengthened their bond, and gave her a new lease on life. Her appetite improved with renewed energy from skill recognition, leaving Mira amazed at AI's role as an outstanding virtual psychologist.

Possible version two:

With Al's assistance, Mira began her plan. Together with her mother, she initiated small, intentional changes: transforming the daily menu into elaborately colorful, inviting meals according to Al-generated recipes tailored for the elderly. When dinner time arrived, instead of helping Grandma as usual, Mira began inviting Grandma to help her in little ways - whether it was stirring the pot or placing a plate. The old lady, surprised initially, gracefully responded to Mira's invitation, with a hint of contented smile crossing her face. Days passing by, the tension that had once hung over Mira's family's dinner table was nowhere to be found. And in its place came natural interactions between Grandma and others. To everyone's relief, Grandma's appetite for food began to return.

As meals became less of a battle, Mira decided to relight the sparkle in grandmother's eyes. After a conversation with Al, Mira decided to make a new apron with her grandma. To her delight, just a quick explanation of her idea was enough to light up her grandma's eyes with excitement. Without hesitation, the two dove into measuring and cutting fabric. Despite Grandma's diminished eyesight and unstable hands, their collaboration flowed effortlessly. Two hours later, Mira was in her freshly crafted apron. "Not bad. But I could have made a better one twenty years ago," commented the lady in a playful tone. "Sure, our best tailor ever!" Mira responded, laughing together with her grannie, a deep sense of gratitude rising in her heart -- for her reliable companion, the Al that effectively helped her reignite her grandma's hope and passion for life.

五、异乡新声，破茧共融

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

It was my first day at the international summer camp in Canada. Students from over twenty countries gathered in the dining hall for breakfast. The atmosphere was lively, filled with greetings in different languages that blended into a cheerful symphony of cultural diversity. Some laughed easily, exchanging jokes with their new friends, while others eagerly compared notes on their travel experiences. Yet I sat alone at a corner table, feeling overwhelmed by the unfamiliar environment and the fast rhythm of English conversations around me.

As I nervously picked at my scrambled eggs, a girl with curly blonde hair approached my table. “Mind if I sit here?” she asked with a warm smile. I nodded, grateful for the company. “I’m Emma, from Sweden,” she introduced herself, offering her hand. “Li Ming, from China,” I replied, shaking her hand tentatively (试探性地). Her friendliness softened my nervousness.

“Is this your first time abroad?” Emma asked, noticing my unease. I admitted it was, and that I was worried about my English skills. “Don’t worry,” she said reassuringly, “everyone here is learning from each other. That’s the beauty of this camp.” Her words comforted me, but I still felt the weight of being far from home.

During the morning activity session, Emma and I ended up in the same group with students from Brazil, Japan, and France. The challenge required us to solve riddles (字谜) in English and find hidden clues. I struggled to understand some of the riddles, often asking for explanations. Though my teammates were patient and encouraging, I couldn’t shake the feeling that I was slowing them down. Still, the moment we were going to solve the last riddle together, I realized I was beginning to belong.

注意：

(1)续写词数应为 150 左右；(2)请按照如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

As we reached the last riddle, a clue about an ancient Chinese tale suddenly popped up.______

Solving the riddle gave me more confidence for the evening cultural presentation.____________

01

READING: 【文本分析】

Characters: Li Ming (a Chinese student, first time abroad, initially insecure about his English and cultural identity); Emma (a friendly and inclusive Swedish girl); other international teammates.

Conflict: Li Ming’s internal conflict between his desire to connect and contribute, and his insecurities stemming from language barriers and being in an unfamiliar cultural environment.

Theme: True confidence and belonging in a multicultural setting come not from perfect language skills, but from the courage to share one’s unique cultural identity and value.

02

THINKING: 【思路构思】

Given sentence 1: As we reached the last riddle, a clue about an ancient Chinese tale suddenly popped up.

衔接句1: 我的队友们纷纷皱眉思考，这个关于“月亮上的仙女和玉兔”的描述对他们来说完全陌生。

过渡句1: 在大家疑惑的目光中，一股奇异的勇气从我心中升起——这是我的时刻。我深吸一口气，开始用简单的英语，结合手势，讲述“嫦娥奔月”的故事。

衔接句2: 通过讲解中国的嫦娥奔月的故事，我帮助团队解决最后一个谜语。

Given sentence 2: Solving the riddle gave me more confidence for the evening cultural presentation.

衔接句3: 那天晚上，当我站在众人面前准备介绍中国书法时，我的手心不再冒汗。

过渡句2: 分享过程，观众的反应；我意识到，我要分享的不是一个完美的表演，而是一扇通往我的世界的窗户。

主旨句: In a world of diverse voices, finding your own unique note and having the courage to play it is what truly creates harmony and belonging.

03

WRITING: 【语言储备】

1 . 刻画内心挣扎与决心：

（运用无灵主语句）

一阵熟悉的紧张感袭来，但紧接着是一种更强烈的、想要分享的冲动。

A familiar wave of nervousness hit/swept over me, followed immediately by a stronger urge to share.

（运用形容词短语放句首）

既紧张又兴奋，我决定抓住这个用我的文化帮助团队的机会。

Nervous yet excited, I decided to seize this chance to help my team with my culture.

（非谓语动词）

内心在 “害怕说错英语” 和 “想帮团队” 之间激烈斗争，我攥紧了拳头，最终决定抓住这个展示自己的机会。

Struggling/Torn fiercely between "fear of speaking broken English" and "wanting to help the team," I clenched my fists, and finally decided to seize this chance to prove myself.

2 . 描绘动作与场景互动：

（运用动作链）

艾玛身子前倾，眼睛亮晶晶地听着，时不时点头，还拿起笔在笔记本上快速记下我提到的故事细节。

Emma leaned forward, listening with bright eyes, nodding from time to time, and even picked up a pen to jot down the story details I mentioned in her notebook.

（运用独立主格结构）

我的队友们围拢过来，脸上带着好奇和鼓励的笑容。

My teammates gathered around, their faces wearing curious and encouraging smiles.

3 . 表达情感突破与主题升华：

（运用主语从句）

让我感到真正融入的，不是我终于完全听懂了英语，而是我的文化被大家听懂了。

What made me feel truly integrated was not that I finally understood all the English, but that my culture was understood.

（运用修辞手法：比喻）

那一刻，我感到自己不再只是团队里安静的一员，而是一座连接东西方的小小桥梁。

At that moment, I felt I was no longer just the quiet member of the team, but a small bridge connecting East and West.

（状语从句+无灵主语句）

当全场响起掌声时，一股从未有过的自豪感涌上心头，我终于明白，语言的障碍永远挡不住真诚的分享。

When applause erupted from the audience, an unprecedented sense of pride welled up in my heart. I finally realized that language barriers could never block sincere sharing.

7 . 构建生动的场景感（细节动作/环境烘托）：

（运用介词短语开头）

在大家恍然大悟的欢呼和掌声中，我看到了Emma对我竖起的大拇指。

Amidst the cheers and applause of sudden understanding, I saw Emma giving me a thumbs-up.

（运用无灵主语句+非谓语动词）

一种温暖的成就感充满了我的胸膛，驱散了所有残留的寒意。

A warm sense of accomplishment filled my chest, driving away all the remaining chill of insecurity.

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As we reached the last riddle, a clue about an ancient Chinese tale suddenly popped up. It described “a lady fleeing to the moon with a jade rabbit.” My teammates from Brazil, Japan, and France frowned in confusion. A familiar wave of nervousness hit me, followed immediately by a stronger urge to share. Nervous yet excited, I decided to seize this chance. “I know this story,” I said, my voice firmer than I expected. I picked up a marker, and drew a simple moon and a flowing fairy on our group’s whiteboard. My teammates gathered around, their faces wearing curious and encouraging smiles. Using simple words and gestures, I told the story of Chang’e. Amidst their cheers of sudden understanding, we solved the final riddle together.

Solving the riddle gave me more confidence for the evening cultural presentation. That night, as I stood before the camp with brushes and ink for my Chinese calligraphy show, my palms were no longer sweaty. A warm sense of accomplishment from the morning still filled my chest. I realized I wasn’t there to give a perfect performance, but to open a window to my world. I showed them how to write “friend” in Chinese. When Emma successfully wrote her first clumsy but earnest character, her joyful laugh was the best applause. In a world of diverse voices, I had learned that finding my own unique note and having the courage to play it is what truly creates harmony and belonging.

跷板惊魂，足尖解围

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Luckily, the end of the school day had finally arrived. When Mrs. Periwinkle stopped Ricardo and reminded him to see the ballet the next day, he forced a smile as he walked quickly past her and into the hallway. The truth was, he was much more excited about the coming soccer match which had occupied his mind for several days.

Little did he know that this experience would change his life forever! It was in the Opera House that Ricardo realized how strong, athletic, powerful and graceful the ballet stars were — just like skillful soccer players in a big game. He watched, amazed. He then decided that he wanted to learn more about ballet. But he definitely did not want to share his plans with his friends, at least not yet — there weren’t many boys who took ballet. What if his friends made fun of him?

Over the next few months, Ricardo took several lessons without telling anyone. Playing soccer had made him strong. His strength helped him perform difficult steps and master complex dance skills like grand jetés (大跳) and pirouettes (旋转). The better he got at it, the more he knew he wanted to dance. And Ricardo realized he couldn’t keep his dancing a secret from his friends for much longer. He just hoped that they would somehow understand.

One summer afternoon, Ricardo was wandering through the city zoo with his best friend, Zach. When they had arrived at the crocodile (鳄鱼) pond, Ricardo took a deep breath and got ready to pour out his heart to Zach. Just then, he noticed a baby girl climbing up onto a teeter-totter (跷跷板). From out of nowhere came a wildly running boy, who suddenly jumped onto the raised end of the teeter-totter, not even noticing the baby! As he jumped, the baby on the other end was sent flying through the air, straight toward the pond.

注意：

(1) 续写词数应为 150 个左右；

(2) 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

At that moment of emergency, Ricardo’s ballet training was put to the test.______

People all around clapped and cheered, “Hero! Hero!”.___________

【2026.2昆明市三诊一模】

01

READING:【文本分析】

Characters: Ricardo (a boy torn between his love for ballet and fear of judgment from friends); Zach (his best friend, about to learn Ricardo's secret); the baby (innocent victim in need of rescue).

Conflict: The internal conflict between Ricardo's fear of revealing his secret passion and the external crisis that forces his hidden skill into public view.

Theme: True courage lies not in hiding who we are, but in letting our authentic selves emerge—especially when others need what only we can offer.

02

THINKING: 【思路构思】

Given sentence 1: At that moment of emergency, Ricardo's ballet training was put to the test.

衔接句1: 千钧一发之际，他来不及思考，芭蕾训练形成的肌肉记忆瞬间被唤醒，身体本能地做出反应。

过渡句1: 他凭借芭蕾练就的爆发力、平衡感和柔韧性，精准完成高难度动作，成功救下即将坠落的女婴。

衔接句2: Ricardo稳稳抱住女婴安全落地，一旁的扎克目睹全程，震惊又敬佩，周围游客也瞬间沸腾。

Given sentence 2: People all around clapped and cheered, "Hero! Hero!".

衔接句3: Ricardo轻轻安抚受惊的女婴，将她交给赶来的家长，脸颊泛红，既紧张又满心自豪。

过渡句2: 他不再隐瞒自己的芭蕾爱好，主动向扎克坦白，也彻底摆脱了内心的自卑，完成了自我接纳。

主旨句:Our hidden passions and persistent practice are never in vain; they equip us with unique strength and courage to do the right thing when it matters most.

03

WRITING: 【语言储备】

1 、刻画内心挣扎与决心

（运用无灵主语句）

内心的恐惧瞬间被救人的决心压倒，他顾不上在意别人的眼光，只想救下这个小生命。

Fear in his heart was instantly overpowered by the determination to save the baby, and he cared nothing about others’ opinions, only wanting to rescue the little life.

（运用形容词短语放句首）

来不及多想，他任由身体接管了一切。

Unable to think twice, he let his body take over completely.

2 、描绘身体感受与环境互动：

（运用动作链）

他冲向围栏，腾空跃起，伸展双臂，稳稳接住了下坠的婴儿。

He sprinted toward the fence, leaped into the air, stretched out his arms, and caught the falling baby securely.

（运用独立主格结构）

双腿如弹簧般发力，身体在空中划出一道优美的弧线。

His legs powering like springs, his body traced a graceful arc through the air.

3 、表达情感突破与主题升华：

（运用主语从句）

真正让Ricardo释然的，不是众人的欢呼，而是Zach眼中那份真诚的骄傲。

What truly relieved Ricardo was not the crowd's cheers, but the genuine pride in Zach's eyes.

（运用修辞手法：比喻）

那一刻，他隐藏许久的秘密如蝴蝶破茧，在阳光下展翅飞翔。

In that moment, his long-hidden secret emerged like a butterfly from its cocoon, spreading its wings in the sunlight.

4 . 构建生动的场景感：

（动作链）

他一个利落的芭蕾大跳，舒展双臂，在空中稳稳接住了急速坠落的女婴。

He made a neat ballet grand jeté, stretched his arms wide, and caught the rapidly falling baby girl firmly in the air.

（with复合结构）

扎克瞪大双眼愣在原地，周围的游客屏住呼吸，随即爆发出雷鸣般的掌声和欢呼声。

Zach froze with his eyes wide open, and the tourists around held their breath, then bursting into thunderous applause and cheers.

（运用倒装句）

如此优美而精准，他的动作让围观者几乎忘记这是一场生死救援。

So graceful and precise was his movement that onlookers almost forgot it was a life-or-death rescue.

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Possible version one:

At that moment of emergency, Ricardo’s ballet training was put to the test. Without a second thought, he launched into a powerful grand jeté, his muscles tightening and releasing like a spring. His years of practice paid off as he soared through the air, his arms outstretched to catch the tiny, screaming baby. In a perfectly controlled pirouette, he absorbed the impact, twisting his body to shield the child from harm as they landed softly on the grass beside the pond, far from the waiting crocodiles. Zach stood frozen, his eyes wide with shock and awe at the display of strength and grace.

People all around clapped and cheered, “Hero! Hero!”. His heart pounding with a mix of embarrassment and pride, Ricardo stood up, gently handing the unharmed baby back to her tearful mother, his cheeks burning with embarrassment and pride. Zach clapped him on the back, grinning from ear to ear. “Dude, that was amazing! Where did you learn to move like that?” Taking a deep breath, Ricardo finally confessed his secret ballet lessons. To his immense relief, Zach’s eyes lit up, “That’s so cool! You’re like a real-life superhero dancer!” From that day on, Ricardo no longer hid his passion, and even inspired some of his soccer teammates to try a class, proving that strength and grace could shine in any arena and realizing the true strength of his skills lay not in secrecy, but in the courage to be himself.

Possible version two:

At that moment of emergency, Ricardo's ballet training was put to the test. Unable to think twice, he let his body take over completely. Without a moment's hesitation, he sprinted toward the fence, leaped into the air, stretched out his arms, and caught the falling baby just inches above the pond. His legs powering like springs, his body traced a graceful arc through the air—a perfect grand jeté born not of performance, but of pure instinct. He landed softly on the other side, knees bending to absorb the impact exactly as he had practiced countless times in secret, the baby safe in his arms. So graceful and precise was his movement that onlookers gasped in disbelief.

People all around clapped and cheered, "Hero! Hero!" Soaked with sweat, Ricardo stood there, the baby clinging to him as her grateful mother rushed over. When he finally turned around, he saw Zach pushing through the crowd. He braced himself for questions, for teasing. But what truly relieved him was not the crowd's cheers, but the pure, unguarded pride in Zach's eyes. "That leap," Zach whispered, "that was ballet, wasn't it?" Ricardo nodded slowly, waiting. Then Zach grinned. "Dude, that was incredible." In that moment, Ricardo realized that the talents we hide in fear can become the source of our greatest strength and the bridge to true friendship.

笨拙的跳跃，勇敢的选择

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The last lesson of the day was PE class. Mary was skipping rope on the playground, surrounded by several classmates watching her. It was her best sport. The rope spun quickly as she jumped. When time was up, the counter showed 201 skips. Smiling, Mary flashed a victory sign to the crowd. Just then, the school bell rang-class was over. Mary packed up her skipping rope. It was time to give her answer to Ms. White.

That morning, Ms. White had asked her if she would be willing to take charge of the class bulletin board (板报) for the upcoming competition. The student who usually handled it, Lily, was out sick, and someone needed to step in. Mary was shocked that Ms. White had chosen her. She responded nervously, insisting that her handwriting was terrible. But Ms. White reassured her, saying she believed in her ability and encouraged her to think it over and let her know her decision after school.

Now, walking toward the teachers’ office, Mary felt nervous. The thought of her messy handwriting being put up on the wall for everyone to see made her stomach turn. She had already made up her mind to say no. With that decision in mind, she quickened her pace and ran across the sports ground.

Mary was about to pass the sandpit when someone nearby caught her attention. It was Tom from a different class, practicing long jump over and over again. He ran with unsteady steps, his arms swinging stiffly as he approached the take-off board. Each time he jumped, his posture was awkward and unskilled, and he always landed far short of where he hoped. Mary learned from Tom’s classmates that no one else in his class had signed up for the long jump event, and without a participant, their class wouldn’t get any points in this event at the school sports meeting. So when the headteacher asked if anyone would give it a try, he volunteered.

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(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Watching Tom practicing patiently, Mary stood there for several minutes and approached him._______

With determination, Mary stepped into the teachers’ office.__________________________________

【2026.4曲靖一中高三4月检测】

01

READING: 【文本分析】

•Characters:

Mary (a girl good at skipping rope, nervous and unconfident about her handwriting, kind and reflective);

Tom (a boy from another class, brave, persistent, volunteers to practice long jump despite being unskilled to help his class);

Ms. White (Mary’s teacher, trusting and encouraging); Lily (the usual bulletin board handler, out sick)

•Conflict: Internal conflict—Mary is hesitant to take charge of the class bulletin board because she is insecure about her messy handwriting, but Tom’s persistence inspires her to face her fear;

External conflict—Tom struggles to practice long jump (unskilled) to avoid his class getting no points in the sports meeting.

•Theme: Courage is not the absence of fear, but taking action despite it; Persistence and willingness to try are more important than being perfect; Being inspired by others can help us overcome our own insecurities.

02

THINKING: 【思路构思】

•Given sentence 1: Watching Tom practicing patiently, Mary stood there for several minutes and approached him.

•衔接句1: “你为什么要参加？你跳得也不太好。”她忍不住问。

•过渡句1: Tom擦了擦额头的汗水，笑着说：“正是因为没人报名，我才更要试试。哪怕只得一分，也比零分强。” 汤姆的回答点醒了她——比起害怕失败，勇敢尝试、为集体付出更有意义，这让她动摇了拒绝老师的想法。

•衔接句2: 和汤姆告别后，玛丽不再犹豫，内心的胆怯渐渐被勇气取代，决定勇敢接受老师的托付。

•Given sentence 2: With determination, Mary stepped into the teachers’ office.

•衔接句3: Ms. White正低头批改作业，听到脚步声抬起头，目光温和地看着她。她深吸一口气，走到怀特老师面前，眼神坚定地说出自己愿意负责板报的决定，还主动说起自己会努力做好。

•过渡句2: 怀特老师欣慰地笑了，玛丽也明白，克服恐惧、勇敢尝试，本身就是一种成长。

•主旨句: Fear is not a reason to give up; instead, it is a chance to be brave, and the courage to try is the first step toward growth.

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WRITING: 【语言储备】

1 . 刻画内心挣扎与转变：

汤姆的坚持像一束光，照亮了她内心的胆怯，她开始犹豫，难道要因为害怕 handwriting不好，就放弃一次成长的机会吗？

Tom’s persistence was like a light, illuminating the timidity in her heart. She began to hesitate—should she give up a chance to grow just because she was afraid of her bad handwriting?

她握紧拳头，下定决心克服内心的恐惧，勇敢接受老师的托付，就像汤姆勇敢挑战自己不擅长的跳远一样。

She clenched her fists, determined to overcome her inner fear and bravely accept the teacher’s trust, just as Tom bravely challenged the long jump he was not good at.

2 . 描绘动作与场景：

汤姆深吸一口气，调整姿势，双臂用力摆动，朝着起跳板冲去，尽管落地时依旧有些踉跄，却立刻起身准备下一次尝试。

Tom took a deep breath, adjusted his posture, swung his arms forcefully, and rushed toward the take-off board. Although he still stumbled when landing, he immediately got up to prepare for the next try.

汗水浸湿了他的衬衫，他的脸上却始终挂着坚定的笑容。

Sweat soaking his shirt, his face still wore a determined smile.

3 . 表达情感交流与顿悟：

真正打动Mary的，不是Tom的技术，而是他那句“总要有人试一试”。

What truly moved Mary was not Tom's skill, but his words: "Someone has to try."

Tom的话像一束光照进了她内心的阴影，驱散了她对自己字迹的全部担忧。

Tom's words shone like a beam of light into the shadows of her heart, dispelling all her worries about her handwriting.

那一刻，她终于明白，比起完美，勇敢尝试更重要，克服恐惧的过程，就是成长的过程。

At that moment, she finally realized that compared with being perfect, brave trying was more important, and the process of overcoming fear was the process of growing up.

4 . 构建结局与主题升华：

如此简单而有力，他的勇气成了她最好的榜样。

So simple yet so powerful, his courage became her best example.

一个清晰的念头浮现在她的脑海：与其担心做不好，不如努力去做好。

A clear thought emerged in her mind: instead of worrying about doing it poorly, she should try her best to do it well.

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Watching Tom practicing patiently, Mary stood there for several minutes and approached him. “Why do you keep practicing even when your jumps aren’t going well?” she asked, her voice full of curiosity. "Nobody else signed up." Tom stopped, wiped the sweat from his forehead, and smiled. Sweat soaking his shirt, his face still wore a determined smile. "That's exactly why I have to try," he said. "Someone has to. Even one point is better than zero." He turned and ran toward the take-off board again. Watching him fall and get back up again and again, her hesitation gradually faded away. What truly moved Mary was not Tom's skill, but his simple belief: someone has to try. Tom's words shone like a beam of light into the shadows of her heart.

With determination, Mary stepped into the teachers' office. Ms. White looked up from her grading, her eyes warm and encouraging. Mary took a deep breath. An unfamiliar courage rose from the depths of her heart, overpowering all fear of failure. She thought of her skipping rope—how she had stumbled and tripped countless times before she could jump 201 times without a single mistake. If she had let those early falls stop her, she would never have known the joy of flashing that victory sign. "Ms. White," she said, her voice steady now, "I'll take charge of the bulletin board. My handwriting may not be perfect, but I'll do my best." Ms. White smiled brightly. "That's the Mary I know," she said. In that moment, Mary realized that that trying mattered more than being perfect, and that sometimes the bravest thing is simply stepping forward when stepping back seems easier.

吱呀的摇椅，无声的和解

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I lived in an old apartment complex where the walls were thin. For weeks, my new neighbor upstairs was keeping me awake every night between ten and midnight. What I heard was slow, forceful footsteps mixed with crying, as if someone were pacing with the weight of the world on shoulders. To cope with the noise, I would sink into the old rocking chair (摇椅) by the window. The rhythm somehow quieted my mind.

But tonight, the noise was just unbearable. I posted in the building’s group chat, “Can the 3C neighbor keep it down after 10?” Almost immediately, Lena, a cashier at a local market, replied, “Same here. Haven’t slept well for weeks.” And Tom, who ran the secondhand shop on the corner, added, “Don’t they realize how loud it is?” A few others responded, but 3C never did.

I’d had enough. “That’s it,” I thought aloud, pulling on my slippers. “I’m going up there!” I stormed to the third floor, playing my angry speech in my head, “Keep it down! Some of us need to work tomorrow!” The moment the door opened, I blurted out (脱口而出), “Do you have any idea how much noise you’re making?” But the rest of my prepared speech got stuck in my throat. A young woman stood there, eyes red, swaying (摇晃) gently back and forth in a desperate attempt to comfort a crying baby. The apartment behind her was humble — no dining table, no chairs, not even a lamp, only a mattress (床垫) and a few empty baby food packets on the floor.

“I’m so sorry, Madam,” she whispered, managing a weak smile, “I’m just trying to get her to sleep.” That was when my anger disappeared. A familiar rhythm surfaced in my mind as I saw her sway the baby tiredly. “I have a chair downstairs that might calm your baby,” I smiled softly. She looked up, eyes widening in disbelief.

注意:

(1)续写词数应为150个左右;

(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

“Let me fetch it for you,” I said and rushed downstairs.

The neighbors responded to my post and agreed to gather at 3C instantly.

【2026.4南京市一模4月检测】

01

READING: 【文本分析】

Characters:

The narrator (a resident of the old apartment, initially annoyed by the noise, kind-hearted and sympathetic);

A young lonely mother living in 3C (poor and helpless, staying up late to soothe her crying baby, misunderstood by neighbors);

Lena, Tom and other neighbors (troubled by the midnight noise, complaining blindly without knowing the truth).

Conflict:

The neighbors are disturbed by the constant midnight noise and complain in the group chat, holding prejudice against the 3C neighbor without understanding her difficult situation.

Theme:

Never judge others hastily before learning their real hardships; Sympathy and kindness can clear up misunderstanding; Neighborhood warmth can comfort those living in loneliness and difficulty.

02

THINKING: 【思路构思】

两句定思路：

Given sentence 1: “Let me fetch it for you,” I said and rushed downstairs.

衔接句 1: 我快步跑回自己家，小心翼翼搬出那把老旧摇椅，心里满是对这位年轻妈妈的心疼。

过渡句 1: 我把摇椅搬到她家，教她轻轻摇晃，舒缓的节奏很快让哭闹的婴儿安静了下来。

衔接句 2: 看着疲惫的妈妈终于放松下来，我想到群里抱怨的邻居，决定把真相告诉大家，化解误会。

Given sentence 2: The neighbors responded to my post and agreed to gather at 3C instantly.

衔接句 3: 邻居们陆续赶来，听完我讲述年轻妈妈的窘迫处境后，之前的不满瞬间化作愧疚与同情。

过渡句 2: 大家纷纷伸出援手，自发送来生活用品和婴儿物资，小小的房间被邻里的善意填满，我也明白了体谅与包容的意义。

主旨句: True understanding comes from walking in others' shoes, and kindness is the best way to bridge misunderstanding between strangers.

原文伏笔：

①"old rocking chair... The rhythm somehow quieted my mind" — 摇椅的节奏具有神奇的安抚作用。

续写呼应：

① 摇椅成功安抚婴儿，"我的节奏"转化为"母女的节奏"，完成意象传递。

原文伏笔：

②"A familiar rhythm surfaced in my mind as I saw her sway the baby" — 母亲摇晃婴儿的节奏与摇椅节奏高度相似。

续写呼应：

② "我"意识到脚步声的真相，内心从愤怒彻底转向愧疚与理解。

原文伏笔：

③"I posted in the building's group chat" — 群聊是贯穿全文的沟通渠道。

续写呼应：

③ "我"在群里发布新消息，为第二段邻居集体行动埋下伏笔。

原文伏笔：

①"Lena... Tom... A few others responded" — 邻居们虽抱怨但关注度高，具备行动基础。

续写呼应：

① Lena、Tom等前文出现的具体人物带着物品现身，形成前后闭环。

原文伏笔：

②"The apartment... was humble — no dining table, no chairs, not even a lamp" — 房间极度空荡，急需物资填充。

续写呼应：

② 空荡的房间被物资与关怀填满，视觉上形成强烈对比。

原文伏笔：

③"a few empty baby food packets" — 暗示母女生活物资匮乏，需要帮助。

续写呼应：

③ 主题升华：从"群聊抱怨"到"群聊互助"，社区凝聚力在3C房间中被激活。

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WRITING: 【语言储备 - 按叙事功能分类】

刻画内心挣扎与决心

1.之前满腔的怒火早已烟消云散，取而代之的是对这位单亲妈妈深深的同情与怜悯。

All my previous anger had long faded away, replaced by deep sympathy for the single young mother.

2.我下定决心要帮她渡过难关，同时也想让其他邻居了解事情的真相，消除无端的误会。

I made up my mind to help her get through the hard time and let other neighbors know the truth to remove unnecessary misunderstanding.

描绘身体感受与环境互动

1.昏暗简陋的房间里，年轻妈妈满眼疲惫，单薄的身躯在空荡荡的房间里显得格外无助。

In the dim and simple room, the young mother looked exhausted, and her thin figure seemed extremely helpless in the empty apartment.

2.摇椅缓缓晃动，轻柔的节奏弥漫在空气中，哭闹的婴儿渐渐闭上了眼睛，安稳进入了梦乡。

The rocking chair swayed slowly, and a gentle rhythm filled the air. The crying baby gradually closed its eyes and fell into a peaceful sleep.

表达情感突破与主题升华

1.那一刻我幡然醒悟，我们仅凭表面的噪音就随意指责他人，却从未想过背后不为人知的难处。

I suddenly realized at that moment that we blamed others casually only based on the noise, without ever thinking about their hidden hardships.

2.邻里之间从来不是互相抱怨，而是彼此体谅、守望相助，微小的善意足以温暖困顿的人生。

Neighborhood life is never about complaint, but understanding and mutual support, and small kindness is enough to warm a difficult life.

构建生动的场景感（细节动作 / 环境烘托）

1.我快步冲下楼，双手稳稳托起摇椅，迈着急促却轻柔的步伐往三楼走去。

I rushed downstairs quickly, held the rocking chair steadily with both hands, and walked towards the third floor in hurried yet gentle steps.

2.邻居们陆续登门，有的带来奶粉衣物，有的轻声安慰妈妈，狭小的房间里溢满了久违的温暖。

Neighbors came one after another. Some brought milk powder and clothes, others comforted the mother softly, and the small room was filled with long-lost warmth.

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Possible version one:

“Let me fetch it for you,” I said and rushed downstairs. I dragged out the rocking chair, wrestled it upstairs and set it down beside her. “It might work,” I encouraged her to try it. She sank into it, cradling her baby, and just like that, the crying softened into quiet breaths. Eyes glistening with tears of gratitude, she whispered, “Thank you.” I waved back, closing the door behind me. Returning home, I posted a message in the group chat, explaining the young mother’s difficult situation and calling on everyone to offer her simple, respectful support. (85 words)

The neighbors responded to my post and agreed to gather at 3C instantly. Lena arrived with some baby food and Tom followed with two chairs, telling he’d bring a bed frame the next day. Warm blankets, a small lamp, and toys neatly piled up at her door. Enveloped in warmth, the new mum choked up, “Thank you all! Your support means the world to me.” We smiled at each other, knowing we’d given a helping hand. I realized the “noise"” we had complained about was actually a cry for help, and our kindness had turned conflict into care. (85 words)

Possible version two:

“Let me fetch it for you,” I said and rushed downstairs. I hurried back to my apartment and carried the old rocking chair carefully to the 3C room. Seeing the chair, the young mother’s eyes sparkled with gratitude. I showed her how to rock it gently. The soft rhythm worked magic; the baby soon stopped crying and fell into sound sleep. Relaxed and relieved, the mother let out a long sigh of tiredness. Moved by her hardship, I decided to explain the whole story to the neighbors in the group chat.

The neighbors responded to my post and agreed to gather at 3C instantly. Learning about the young mother’s difficult life and lonely struggle, all of them felt ashamed of their blind complaint. No one complained about the noise any more. Instead, Lena brought daily groceries and Tom donated baby supplies. Everyone offered sincere comfort and help. Watching the warm scene, I realized we should never judge others rashly. Only by understanding and sympathy can we build a harmonious and warm neighborhood.

Possible version three:

“Let me fetch it for you,” I said and rushed downstairs. Dragging the old rocking chair from my apartment, I carried it carefully up to 3C. The young mother’s tired eyes widened with disbelief and gratitude. “Sit,” I said softly, showing her how to set it in gentle motion. The familiar rhythm worked its quiet magic; the baby’s cries gradually faded into peaceful silence, her tiny chest rising and falling in deep sleep. Watching her, I felt a sting of guilt for my earlier anger. Moved by her silent struggle, I took out my phone and explained the whole story to the neighbors in the group chat.

The neighbors responded to my post and agreed to gather at 3C instantly. Within minutes, soft footsteps gathered outside the door. Lena arrived with a bag of fresh groceries, and Tom followed carrying a small lamp that pushed back the room’s darkness. All the complaints were gone, replaced by quiet offers of help — baby supplies, warm meals, and sincere apologies. The young mother looked around, tears streaming down her face, unable to speak. Standing in that humble room now filled with warmth, I realized understanding and sympathy — these are the only foundations upon which a true neighborhood can be built.

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