<FONT face="Comic Sans MS" size=3>I have been keeping busy for these two days, as my brother got engaged with her girlfriend yesterday, with whom he fell in love 7 years ago. The party is pretty hot and everyone who attended the ceremony had a enjoy time.<br>    As far as my brother and her girlfriend to be concerned, it is 8 years ago that they got acquainted with each other, as they were admitted to the chemical college of Beijing as fresh. They lead a happy time during the next 4 years. After graduated, my brother found a job in a chemical company while the girl worked in another district. Living in two different areas didn’t effect the feeling between them, and they decided to get engagement in the 5.1 vacation.<br>    On the second day of the vacation, the girl’s parents as well as the relatives from all over the city, came to visit my brother’s house. There were so many people I had never seen before. When all the friends were here to ready, we went to the hotel to hold the ceremony. Flowers. Wishes. And congratuations. I enjoyed being able to seat by the leading actress because I can talk more with her to know much more about the romantic history between the young lovers. She didn’t tell me much about their merry and future, but I think that it would be rather soon.. When the young couple  posed in the crowd, I gasped the photos for their album, which is the proof of the beginning of another romantic story.</FONT>

[此贴子已经被Rita娜于2006-5-16 10:54:35编辑过]

Let me give them the best wishes,wish they will be happy forever![em23][em23][em23][em23][em23][em23][em23][em23][em23][em23][em23][em23][em23][em23]

Dear magic,your essay is beautiful both in word and feeling,good job,come on!

I did some correction, wish you don't mind it,magic!

<FONT face=Arial size=4>All men are fallible and flawed in this homogenization world when we're suffering the homonymous situation, be careful and shrewd with a sharp eye and yell out.  Trust youself and do what you wanna do, Rita^-^</FONT>[em10]

Rita,
I suggest you correct others' work on a reply instead on the person's actuall work.
To me, it is respecting the original writer.

Dear Rita,
Thanks.
It's very nice of you to give me so many help.
My poor may attribute to some mistakes.Any correction will be well gratituded.But would you tell me the mistake as I can learn it by heart and not commit it again.
                                              Yours sincerely
                                                  magicsxq

i like the ambience here,i like all of you ,my dear friends!go on and go free!

<DIV class=quote><B>以下是引用<I>Quickie</I>在2006-5-16 13:28:22的发言：</B><BR>
Rita,
I suggest you correct others' work on a reply instead on the person's actuall work.
To me, it is respecting the original writer.</DIV>
Thanks for your friendly suggestion,Q
but i just change nothing there but font

<DIV class=quote><B>以下是引用<I>puppy</I>在2006-5-16 12:39:46的发言：</B><BR><FONT face=Arial size=4>All men are fallible and flawed in this homogenization world when we're suffering the homonymous situation, be careful and shrewd with a sharp eye and yell out.  Trust youself and do what you wanna do, Rita^-^</FONT>[em10]</DIV>
thank you ,dear Puppy!
ur writing is pretty good, you let me know what is poor