开始学习新概念2 以后每次都把自己的写作发上来，望大家指点

The postcards always spoil writer's holidays.last summer the writer spend holidays at Italy.The writer think about send postcards to his friend every day.But he can't send any cards. He buy thirty-seven cards.but he can't write any cards.

大家看看有没有什么错误啊

加油！

另外再从作者第一人称的角度去写，感觉还会有不同。

最后一句中can有能力的意思，换个更准确的词用用。

I have just received a letter from my brother.I am a engineer.I have been Australia for six months.I have already visited many places.Now I am in Alice Spings. I havenever been abroad before.so I am enjoying this trip very much.

Mr. Scott have tow garages now.one is in silbury,the other in Pinhurst.Silbury is only five miles from Pinhurst.But he cannot get a telephone for his garage of Pinhurst.So he buysome pigeons.They carry messages from one garage to the otherin three minutes.

The writer just moved to a house in Bridge Street.Yesterday,a beggar knock at her door.The beggar Sing songs,In return for this,The writer give him a meal.Beggar's name is Percy Buttons.He always call at every house once a month.

注意你的时态， 幸亏我是中国人 ，看得懂中国英文 。

那句事态有问题 能帮我指点一下吗

The detectives were waiting at airport all morning,They were expecting a valuable parcel of diamonds.tow man tookthe parcel Off the plane.Two others opened the parcel.the parcel was full of stone and sand

还想问一下 为啥我现在新浪show等不上 说我的机器受限制