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| myfriend ,hugh has always been fat. but things got so bad recently that he decied to go on a diet.first he began his diet a week ago .he wrote out a long list of allthe foods which were forbiden.,the list included all foods hugh loves:butterpotater rice beer chocolate and sweets.yesterday i called on him.it was not surpised at seeing that he was still as fat as ever when i rang the bell.he led me into the his room and hurriedly hid a large parcel under his desk.it was obvious that he was embarressed. i asked: "what are you doing?"he put the parcel on the desk and smiled guiltilyto tell me"my diet is so strict that i have to reward myself occasionally" then he showed me the contents of the parcel .it contained five larg bars of chocolate and three bags of sweets. |
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lesson 51 the rewriting and in practise--Reward for virtue My firend told me that he was very sad recently, his son's test scores had been come down, and things got to bad that he decided to help his son's learning. He began his help two week ago. First of all, he wrote out a list of all the things which were forbidden.The list included most of the things his son loves: Watching TV, play football, swiming, play tennis, and play computergame. Yesterday I paid him a visit. I rang the bell and he led me into his livingroom. I was surprised to see that he was watching TV with his son. He was obvious and embarrassed.When I asked him what he was doing, he smiled guitily and explained that his help was too strict. he told me that his son's learning had been progress. So he had to reward his son occasionally. |
| My friend, anne, has always been fat, so everyone says she must go on a diet. she began her diet last summer. At first, she made a long list of all foods which were forbidden. It included which Anne like best all foods. At the first month, she got successful. Her weigh got the standard. She looked very well. ButI called on her last month, It seems that she as fat as ever, even fatterthan before. When I rang the bell and she opened the door. She led me into the room and hurriedly hid a large parcel under the desk. I asked her what she was doing. She was very imbarrassed and then put the parcel on the desk. She explained that her diet was so strict that she had to reward herself occasionally. Then she showed me the contents of the parcel. It contained five hamburgers and a large number of sweets. |
| Hugh is one of my friends. He has been always fat, but things got bad recently, so he decided to go on a diet. He began his diet a month ago. First of all, he wrote out a long list of foods to be forbidden. Most of foods he loves were on it: butter, potatoes, milk, beer, chocolate, sweets and so on. Yesterday, I visited him to see whether he had been successful on his diet. I rang the bell and Hugh soon appeared in front of my face. In accord with my expectation, he was still as fat as ever. He led me into his room and hurriedly hid a parcel under his desk. He was obviously embarrassed. When I asked him what he was doing, he smiled with a guilt and then put the parcel on the desk. He explained that his diet was so strict that he had to reward himself occasionally. He showed me the contents of the parcel. It contained five large bars of chocolate and three bags of sweets. |
| My friend white has always been fat. but things go so bad recently, that he decided to go on lost weight. I asked him how to lost weight, he told me that he would diet and sport. He began his diet a week ago. First of all, he wort out a long list of all the foots which were fobidden and bought a pair of sport shoes. In his list included most of the foods he loves:cake hamburger biscuits french fries chocolate and sweets. Yesterday, I paid him a visit, when I rang the bell, I was not surprised to see that white was still as fat as ever. He led me into his room, then he hurriedly hid a large parcle under his desk. It was obvious that he was very embarrassed. When I asked him what he was doing, he smiled guiltily and then put the parcel on the desk. He expained that his diet was so strict that he had to reward himself occasionally. He showed me the contents of the parcel. It contianed five large bars of chocolate and three bags of sweets. |
发挥的很好。 3# annyli thank you! |
 都写点很好,语法也连惯,佩服楼上的几位! |
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My friend, Anne, has always been fat, so everyone says she must go on a diet. She began her diet last summer. At first, she made a long list of all foods which were forbidden. It included that Anne likes best all foods. At the first month, she got successful. Her weigh got the standard. She looked very well. But I called on her last month, It seems that she was as fat as ever, even fatter than before. When I rang the bell and she opened the door. She led me into the room and hurriedly hid a large parcel under the desk. I asked her what she was doing. She was very embarrassed and then put the parcel on the desk. She explained that her diet was so strict that she had to reward herself occasionally. Then she showed me the contents of the parcel. It contained five hamburgers and a large number of sweets You did a great job, if you don’t mind. Could we discuss a few words that I remarked with right color? |
| 谢谢冰玮鼓励！ |
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