I love telling stories in this room,but I don't like

making it over before.I told one story recently ,but my speech took me longer than I expected . One day ,I was in the front of the queue where there were many people wanted repeating their stories ." I'd like to tell you a story ." I said to the techer as I got on the public mic ."but I don't know where the ending of my story is .""I’ll tell you where to end it .” answered the teacher . my story stared from that get a good view of the mountain and I enjoy in the beauty...After a long time . my thinking was stopped by the teacher's massage , it said " hi ,it is too late. You'll have to go to bed ." I looking round , I realized with a shock that I was the only person left in this room ." this is as far as our room opened .""is this the end of my story ?"I asked ," oh , dear !" said the teacher suddenly, " I forgot to tell you to stop ."" it doesn’t matter "I said "I 'll end it here."" are you going to go on your story now?" said the teacher."I have just had a nap ."" well , In that case , I prefer to continue my story to you ." I answered .

I love telling stories in this room, but I didn't like making it over before. I told one story recently, but my speech took me longer time than I expected.



One day ,I was in the front of the queue where there were many people wanted repeating their stories .



" I'd like to tell you a story ." I said to the techer as I had got on the public mic ."but I don't know where the ending of my story is ."

"I’ll tell you where to end it .” answered the teacher . My story started from that geting a good view of the mountain and I enjoyed in the beauty...After a long time, my thinking was stopped by the teacher's massage , it said " hi ,it is too late. You'll have to go to bed ." I looked around , I realized with a shock that I was the only person left in this room .

" this is as far as our room opened ."( i'm not sure about the meaning of this sentence, did you mean the time your speech took was as long as the room opened?)

"is this the end of my story ?"I asked .

" Oh , dear !" said the teacher suddenly, " I forgot to tell you to stop ."" it doesn’t matter "I said "I 'll end it here."" are you going to go on with your story now?" said the teacher."I have just had a nap ."" well , In that case , I prefer to continue my story to you ." I answered .



Well, i have to say, the teacher is very nice. Haha

i agree with nico,haha...

hahaha , thanks a lot . teachers .

[1_29]" this is as far as our room opened ."

这句话，我想表达：我们房间就开门到这个时间了。可是， 我就是跟着这句话的英语意思顺下来的。

我所以就不敢在写了。

写作需要积累的， 不能只靠感觉，所以，我停止写东西了。

老师们，真的辛苦你们这段时间对我的帮助。

这个故事你们还能看下去，我真的很高兴。谢谢。我会努力学习的。

谢谢大眼睛和小眼睛老师。

哈哈

谢谢大眼睛和小眼睛老师。

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嘻嘻，写作也是要靠心情的啦。想写的时候再写也行，我们随时帮你出谋划策。

[1_28]我的眼睛也很大啊！只是眯着嘛......