http://www.tudou.com/v/3l3XyaPBKj4

读的很棒哦不过it's always hot in

June ,July and August 这里的July 应该读声调

标题的 pleasant这里的 e 的音发得有点像梅花音了

but it rains ....这里的 but it 连起来读会更好听

warm这里的 ar 发长音，发成了短元音

very这里的 v 的音发成了 w

November这里的 v的音也是发成了w ，可能这个音你需要多注意

有些地方连读非常好，读音也很好

and 前读升调，后读降调。It's often hot in June, July and August.

veryNovemberv发[v] 音 读成 [w]了

It sounds good, but it seems to me that the speaker pronounced the word "very" [weri] instead of [veri].