it is a bit strange that this is the first version of my attempt then the rest did not work at all. not sure whether the problems are fixed up already.

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This is the assignment that I recorded for correcting the errors I made in the class today. I really appreciated teacher's practical and encouraging comments and advice.

Cheers

CrystalRpt

good reading. good attitude. good speed. good voice. a few words:

* it was pretty scary...: not clear

* looking back: sounds like bike

you are making good progress. next time please read a longer paragraph. thank you so much! great job. 9/10