英语写作一直是我的弱项。总认为摘要写作很简单。正是有了这样的思想，导致英语一直学得不踏实，根基不牢固。

告诉自己：Rome was not built in a day 。If you practise more，you can make great progress。

先从小点滴做起。

如果有错误，希望大家不吝指出。先谢过啦！！批评，可以是毫不客气的。

我常常会把单词也给拼错了，一定要告诉我哈！！[1_47] [1_29]

为了让自己的疑惑得到充分的解答，也为了不浪费各位同学的宝贵时间，我把自己有疑问的地方用红色标出来的，这样更醒目一些。所以，如果谁看到了，就解答一下。谢了！

Lesson 1A private conversation

The writer went to the theatre last week ,he did not enjoy the play.A young man and a young woman were sitting behindhim,they were talking loudly .the writer could not hear the actors,he turned round and said:'I can't hear a

word.'The young man said:'This is a private conversation.'

(56 words)

多出了一个单词，都不知道要减去哪个。

Lesson2Breakfast or lunch?

The writer always gets up late on sundays.Last sunday,he got up very late,his aunt telephoned then.She had just arrived by train,she was coming to see him,he said:'I'm still having breakfast.'His aunt was very surprised.The time was one o'clock.

(49 words)

Lesson3please send me a card

Postcards always spoil the writer's holidays.He spent his holidays in Italy last summer.he thought aboutpostcards

every day ,He did not send any cards to his friends.He bought thirty-seven cards on the last day .He stayed in his room all day .He did not write any cards.

(50 words)

明天,继续!大家帮忙检查一下有没有错误啊~~

这个练习我一直在出，看一下置顶的帖子，我以后会把前面的补齐的

是指那个课文复述和改写的帖吗?我要努力，赶上你们的进度才行。

Lesson4An exciting trip

The writer has just received a letter from his brother,Tim.Tim is an engineer.He has been in Australia for six months.He has already visited many places.He is in Alice Springs now .Tim has ever been abroad before.Hs is enjoying his trip very much .

(48 words)

Lesson 5 No wrong numbers

Mr.Scott has opened his second garage in Pinhurst. His first garage is in Silbury.Silbury is only five miles away . Mr.Scott can not get atelephone for his new garage.

He has bought twelve pigeons.They carry messages from one garage to the other in three minutes.

I don't know ifthe sentence under the red line is right?

画了红线的句子,不知道是不是正确呢?

Lesson 6 PercyButtons

The write has just moved to a house in Bridge street . A beggar knocked ather door yesterday .He sang songs.The writer gave him a meal and a glass of beer for return for this .(in return for this 可不可以放在名尾呢?)The beggar's name is Percy Buttons .He calls at every house once a month.

这么用将原文的因果关系弄反了。（仅供参考--by雪狼）

Lesson 7Too late

Detectives were waiting at the airport all morning.They were expecting a valuable parcel of diamonds from South Africa. Two men took the parcel into the Customs House after the arrival of the plane .(这个词组蛮好!)Two detectives opened it .The parcel was full of stones and sand.

此改写不成功，没有反应本文中心意思。--by 雪狼

expect sth

expect for sb

expect sb to do sth

valuable precious priceless worthless valuless

jad

a few hours earlier

body guardlife guard

Lesson 8The best and the worst

Joe Sanders has the best garden in town.He wins "The Nicest Garden Competition' each year.Bill Frith has a fine garden too.Joe's is better.The writer's garden is terrible.He always wins a prize for the worst garden.

' town ' 前缺定冠词吧？---by 雪狼

Lesson 9 A cold welcome

We went to the Town Hall on New Year's Eve.There were a lot of people there.In twenty minutes' time,the Town Hall clock would strike twelve.(?时间状语能否放在前面呢?)At five minutes to twelve ,it stopped. It refused to welcome the New Year ,the crowd began to laugh and sing.

Lesson 10 Not for jazz

We own an old clavichord,it was made in 1681.My grandfather bought the instrument many years ago .A visitor damaged it recently ,she tried to play jazz on it ,andbroketwo of the strings. A friend of my father's is repairing it now .

Lesson 11One good turn deserves another

I was having dinner at a restaurant .I saw Tony Steele after a while .He always borrows money from his friends .Tony sat at my table .I asked him to lend me twenty pounds.He gave me the money at once.He wanted me to pay for his dinner.

Lesson 12 Goodbye and good luck

We shall meet Captain Charles Alison at Portsmouth Harbour early tomorrow morning. He will be in his small boat. He will leave at eighto'clock .We shall say goodbye to him .He will take

part in an important race across the Atlantic.

Lesson 13The Green wood Boys

The Greenwood Boys are singers.They will be coming here tomorrow.Most of the young people in the town will be meeting them at the station.They will give five performances.

The police will be trying to keep order as usual.

Lesson 14 Do you speak English?

The writer gave a lift to a young man in the south of France last year. They greeted each other in French.The writer does not speakany French .They sat in silence. At the end of the journey ,the young man said :' Doyou speak English? ' He was English himself .

今天，最后的一课。

Lesson 15 Good news

Mr.Harmsworth wanted to see me.I felt very nervous about this .I went into his office.He said that business was bad .The firm could not pay such large salaries .Twenty peoplehad left already.He did notask meleave as well.

Lesson 16 A polite request

Traffic police usually give youaticket if you park your car in the wrong place . During a holiday in sweden, the writer found a polite note on his car .The traffic policeman wanted him to pay attention to the street signs.Anyone can notfail to obey a request like this .

加油浅浅，向你学习！！！

上面改写我学习了一下，写得不错啊，同时觉得有些地方也有不妥之处，重要一点就是改写要围绕原文中心思想，不然无从对比，不知认同否？！

Lesson 9 时间状语前置没问题，我是觉得你划线的句子和后面的句子在时间承接上不连惯，是否可以再修改一下。

再次向你学习，言语不妥请见谅！！！