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Lesson 45 改写-1 the wallet was leared 找错!

发布者: 茹诗 | 发布时间: 2009-3-24 23:46| 查看数: 1390| 评论数: 4|

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本帖最后由 tezukazyunko 于 2009-3-26 13:20 编辑

Lesson 45 改写-1 the wallet was leared

At present,The whole world soon learnt that most of the people had been lost their money in shock market .Mr.Xiaoliu , my colleague had lost his money after he taking his savings to the stock market .Mr.xiaoliu was sure that his savings must have been returned by one of the good stocks , but it was not getting better and better .Three months passed, and then one morning, he found a email in his email-box and it contained a dividend list .together with a information which said “ Poor guy , at the moment ,I have to say , you only have 5 percent income now .”Two months later , some more money had lost into the green stock market , there was a note sent to him and with another cold- hearted

word , “ Only 25 money cost in your pocket now .”

In time , all his money had been lost in the crazy stock market . the last note with a terrible word “You are 100 percent poor man now.”




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he found a email in his email-box whichcontained a dividend list ,together with a information

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tezukazyunko 发表于 2009-3-24 23:46:39
he found a email in his email-box whichcontained a dividend list ,together with a information
tezukazyunko 发表于 2009-3-25 11:02:50
he found a email in his email-box whichcontained a dividend list ,together with a information
tezukazyunko 发表于 2009-3-25 11:04:54
there was a note sent to him and with another cold- hearted .

another note was sent to him with a cold- hearted

just my views!

this story is funny
茹诗 发表于 2009-3-25 11:38:51
太好了, 这样及时点评, 谢谢。 辛苦了。 我改过来。
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