重金悬赏(虽然可能过期了,不过作为一个求职信,还是不错的,望大家来试试)

发布者: flying0422 | 发布时间: 2006-7-8 08:05| 查看数: 14152| 评论数: 7|帖子模式

各位家园好友:

我最近在找工作,前几天面试了一家全球500强企业,感觉不是特别好.我想发下面的邮件过去,但是我翻译的不是很好，所以我在此重金悬赏好的翻译,希望大家积极参加,参加者都有金币,翻译最好的我将奖赏10个金币(从我自己的腰包哦).希望大家积极参加! 请大家帮帮我,这可是间接能决定我的命运的! 先谢谢各位拉!

你们好!我是7月5日到贵公司面试的Flying.

自从上次面试后,我对贵公司的印象很深刻.虽然也有别的公司欣赏我,但我觉得更向往贵公司.因为我觉得贵公司是个综合素质很高,管理性强,制度完善,富有朝气.是一个很优秀的团队.我非常希望能有机会成为这个团队中的一员,在这个团队中发挥自己的一份才华.

希望贵公司能给我一个机会,我将非常珍惜这个机会.假如因为我英语等条件不足,只达到贵公司59分的应聘条件,我真诚地希望贵公司能借1分给我,让我以60分及格成为贵公司的一名员工，那么，在以后的工作中，我将会以借一还十，借一还二十的态度投入到这份工作中去!假如我真的不能符合贵司要求,落选了,我也会不断加倍学习,完善自身的条件.

期待您的佳音.谢谢!

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flying0422 发表于 2006-7-8 14:55:24

How do you do! My name is Flying. I am the personal interview that arrives your company on July 5th.

First, I think my information management background is helpful. I have enough knowledge to arrange the production scheduler. Secondly, I have studyed for a lot of training management. Finally, I like study and I like English. These qualifications will make me successful in my career.I have learned a lot about business and basic office skills. In addition , I learned at my previous jobs how to cooperate with my colleagues.

After last time personal interview, my impression to your company is very deep. Although also has other company to appreciate me,I feel to look forward to your company more. Because I feel your company is a comprehensive character very high, the management is strong, the system is perfect, full of vigor. It is a very excellent and outstanding team. I extremely hoped can have the opportunity to become one member in this team, an artistic talent of the exertive oneself in this team.
Hope your company can give me an opportunity, I will cherish this opportunity very much. If because condition and so on my English is insufficient, attains your company 59 divide of accept appointment a condition, I honestly hope your company can borrow 1 divide to me, lets me pass an examination into a your company's staff by 60 divide. Then, in the later work, I will be able to borrow one also ten, will borrow also 20 manner to invest into this work in! If I really can't meet an expensive department request, has fail to be elected, I would also continuously double the study, the condition of the perfect oneself.
Expect your good tidings.Thanks!
各位,帮我看看哪里有语法错误啊? 帮我提意见哈!

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woshiyaoshi 发表于 2006-7-8 23:38:49