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Tourism im my City Tourism is beneficial to both travelers and local people. You don't only sightsee the beautiful view and relax your mood, but also understand local customs when you traveling. At the same time, tourism would improve economy and offer more chances of employment for local people. Meanwhile tourism has some drawbacks too, the development of tourism might destroy natural resources, also might change the good customs of local people. So we should take advantage of tourism effectively. Such as improve the traffic network constantly, deverlop the naturel resources correctly, develop education of tourism, etc... |
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<STRONG>Happy a day</STRONG> <DIV> <FONT face="Times New Roman" size=4>My classmate <FONT color=#ff0000>called me the day before yesterday</FONT>. We have never <FONT color=#f70909>met </FONT>for 5 years. It's so happy when we <FONT color=#f70909>met</FONT> again. We were talking something about work<FONT color=#ff0000>, </FONT>friendship<FONT color=#ff0000>, </FONT>our classmates and good time at school together.</FONT> <p><FONT face="Times New Roman" size=4>He got <FONT color=#ff0000>his GF together with him</FONT> this time. She is a beautiful and lovely girl. She and I felt like old friends at the first <FONT color=#f70909>meet</FONT>. <FONT color=#f70909>I envied</FONT> them when <FONT color=#a0a0a0><FONT color=#ff0000>I first saw them</FONT> </FONT>together so happy because of I have <FONT color=#f70909>had</FONT> <FONT color=#f70909>no </FONT>BF yet.</FONT> <p><FONT face="Times New Roman" size=4>So <FONT color=#000000>that</FONT> <FONT color=#f73809>will be</FONT> my best New Year's gift.</FONT></DIV><FONT size=4><STRONG></STRONG></FONT> |
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Dear Cactus, Thanks very much for helping me. i will put more effort to improve myself in english. yours, Zoe |
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<FONT face="Times New Roman" size=4><FONT color=#f70909><FONT color=#000000>quote:</FONT></FONT></FONT> <FONT face="Times New Roman" size=4><FONT color=#f70909>I envied</FONT> them when <FONT color=#a0a0a0><FONT color=#ff0000>I first saw them</FONT> </FONT>together so happy because of I have <FONT color=#f70909>had</FONT> <FONT color=#f70909>no </FONT>BF yet.</FONT> <BR> ---------- "because of"----> "because" |
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Some questions: "call on sb." means 拜访, 为什么不能用 "the day before yesterday" “前天”前不用介词吗? i envy them 能不能用现在时。因为我想表达的意思是到现在还羡慕他们因为我到目前还没BF. |
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Even your title should be changed to: "A Happy Day" Hi Zoey [em07] |
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well done ! guys, let's help eacher with open arms. zoe, ‘the day before yesterday' is an adverbial phrase. You can say I envy them when I see them so happy together. [em07] |
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Thanks, Quickie,Vekin and all the correction: A happy day My classmate called me the day before yesterday, we have never met for 5 years. It is so happy when we met again. We were talking something about work, friendship, our classmates and goot time at shcool together. He got his GF together this time. She is a beautiflu and lovely girl, she and i felt like old friends at the first meet. I envyed them whem i saw them so happy together beacuse of i had no BF yet. |
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Zoey, Are you going to do another post soon? |
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