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[原创]Happy a day

发布者: zoe | 发布时间: 2006-1-4 13:41| 查看数: 17389| 评论数: 10|

<FONT face="Times New Roman" size=4>My classmate called on me at the day before yesterday. We have never meted for 5 years. It's so happy when we were meet again. We were talking something about work、friendship、our classmates and good time at school together until stop.</FONT>
<FONT face="Times New Roman" size=4>He got him GF together this time. She is a beautiful and lovely girl. She and I felt like old friends at the first meeting. I'm envy them when met them together so happy because of I have not BF yet.</FONT>
<FONT face="Times New Roman" size=4>So that was my best New Year's gift.</FONT>
[此贴子已经被Cactus于2006-1-8 14:13:30编辑过]


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zoe 发表于 2006-1-4 16:55:47
Tourism im my City
Tourism is beneficial to both travelers and local people. You don't only sightsee the beautiful view and relax your mood, but also understand local customs when you traveling. At the same time, tourism would improve economy and offer more chances of employment for local people.
Meanwhile tourism has some drawbacks too, the development of tourism might destroy natural resources, also might change the good customs of local people.
So we should take advantage of tourism effectively. Such as improve the traffic network constantly, deverlop the naturel resources correctly, develop education of tourism, etc...
Cactus 发表于 2006-1-8 14:22:40
<STRONG>Happy a day</STRONG>
<DIV>
<FONT face="Times New Roman" size=4>My classmate <FONT color=#ff0000>called me the day before yesterday</FONT>. We have never <FONT color=#f70909>met </FONT>for 5 years. It's so happy when we <FONT color=#f70909>met</FONT> again. We were talking something about work<FONT color=#ff0000>, </FONT>friendship<FONT color=#ff0000>, </FONT>our classmates and good time at school together.</FONT>
<p><FONT face="Times New Roman" size=4>He got <FONT color=#ff0000>his GF together with him</FONT> this time. She is a beautiful and lovely girl. She and I felt like old friends at the first <FONT color=#f70909>meet</FONT>. <FONT color=#f70909>I envied</FONT> them when <FONT color=#a0a0a0><FONT color=#ff0000>I first saw them</FONT> </FONT>together so happy because of I have <FONT color=#f70909>had</FONT> <FONT color=#f70909>no </FONT>BF yet.</FONT>
<p><FONT face="Times New Roman" size=4>So <FONT color=#000000>that</FONT> <FONT color=#f73809>will be</FONT> my best New Year's gift.</FONT></DIV><FONT size=4><STRONG></STRONG></FONT>
lyyenglish 发表于 2006-1-8 20:59:06
right here to collect,
zoe 发表于 2006-1-9 15:11:23
Dear Cactus,
Thanks very much for helping me. i will put more effort to improve myself in english.
yours,
Zoe
RealKevin 发表于 2006-1-9 15:36:26
<FONT face="Times New Roman" size=4><FONT color=#f70909><FONT color=#000000>quote:</FONT></FONT></FONT>
<FONT face="Times New Roman" size=4><FONT color=#f70909>I envied</FONT> them when <FONT color=#a0a0a0><FONT color=#ff0000>I first saw them</FONT> </FONT>together so happy because of I have <FONT color=#f70909>had</FONT> <FONT color=#f70909>no </FONT>BF yet.</FONT> <BR>

---------- "because of"----&gt; "because"
zoe 发表于 2006-1-9 16:37:06
Some questions:   "call on sb." means 拜访, 为什么不能用
"the day before yesterday" “前天”前不用介词吗?
i envy them 能不能用现在时。因为我想表达的意思是到现在还羡慕他们因为我到目前还没BF.
Quickie 发表于 2006-1-11 07:07:21
Even your title should be changed to: "A Happy Day"
Hi Zoey [em07]
kevin 发表于 2006-1-11 14:09:30
well done ! guys, let's help eacher with open arms.
zoe,
‘the day before yesterday' is an adverbial phrase.
You can say I envy them when I see them so happy together.
[em07]
zoe 发表于 2006-1-12 15:13:13
Thanks, Quickie,Vekin and all
the correction:
A happy day
My classmate called me the day before yesterday, we have never met for 5 years. It is so happy when we met again. We were talking something about work, friendship, our classmates and goot time at shcool together.
He got his GF together this time. She is a beautiflu and lovely girl, she and i felt like old friends at the first meet. I envyed them whem i saw them so happy together beacuse of i had no BF yet.
Quickie 发表于 2006-1-18 10:11:06
Zoey,
Are you going to do another post soon?
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