http://www.tudou.com/v/spFIY5M4KAk/&rpid=4713299/v.swf

It wasn't all romantic. I didn't have a dorm room, so I slept on the floor in friends' rooms, I returned coke bottles for the 5? deposits to buy food with, and I would walk the 7 miles across town every Sunday night to get one good meal a week at the Hare Krishna temple. I loved it. And much of what I stumbled into by following my curiosity and intuition turned out to be priceless later on. Let me give you one example:

all romantic, 好像读得的是 all lomantic, L和R的音这里是不能连读的

dorm, or不够美式, 还记得"木耳"吗..还是MM音的问题, 和time的MMMM是一样的,你读出来的是door的英式,

FLOOR, L的音听不到, FL的音要很清晰, 试试看读 FLIRT,FLUTE,FLY

Later on, R的音完全听不到了R可以和on 连读

8.0/10 {:soso_e179:}很认真噢

Great reading, a few things could be improved.

* Romantic: not lomantic

* Dorm room: i didn't hear the 'm' in dorm

* Hare Krishna: Hare is read like Haree, check google for correct pronounciation

* Deposits: I didn't hear the 's'

* Sunday night: I couldn't hear it clearly

* Coke: the 'o' in the word could be a little longer

Thanks. I could be wrong. If you don't agree with these, I have no problem with that.

Have a good day!

Sorry, I forgot to give the mark. It shall be 8/10. Thank you.

lol i thought u r gonna be quite a strict marker though poor old kitty...turns out that u r still just a big old softie inside {:soso_e176:} xx

回复 2# AOI

Thank you teacher

回复 3# lazyoldcat

Thank you teacher I couldn't agree you any more.