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发布者: Dive | 发布时间: 2011-3-25 22:03| 查看数: 3584| 评论数: 7|

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我有两只小猫。他们非常漂亮。一只是黄色的。另一只是白色的。他们非常可爱。黄色的小猫很调皮。他经常到处跑。他最喜欢的游戏是玩球、绳子和石头。而白色的小猫非常温和。她喜欢洗她的脸。并且她不喜欢和人玩。她经常跳上我的膝盖。我喜欢给她洗澡。

噢,我的小猫为我带来了很多愉快。我们是非常好的朋友。我爱他们。

I have got two baby cats. they are very beautiful. One is yellow. the other is white. they are very lovely. the yellow cat is very naughty. He likes to play with people. He often runs here and there. His favourite game is playing with balls, ropes and stones. But the white cat is very gentle. She likes to wash her face. And she doesn′t like to play with people. She often jumps onto my knees. I like to give her a bath.

Oh, my baby cats bring me much happiness. We are very good friends. I love them.

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本帖最后由 凯旋城 于 2011-3-26 16:59 编辑 {:soso_e179:},一看功底就很强。 1.我更倾向于用like doing. 当然,你写的也应该挑不出语法毛病吧。主要看你侧重于表达什么意思。2.个别地方注意开头字母大写。这个你当然知道,应该只是马虎。

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凯旋城 发表于 2011-3-25 22:03:53
本帖最后由 凯旋城 于 2011-3-26 16:59 编辑

{:soso_e179:},一看功底就很强。 1.我更倾向于用like doing. 当然,你写的也应该挑不出语法毛病吧。主要看你侧重于表达什么意思。2.个别地方注意开头字母大写。这个你当然知道,应该只是马虎。
david 发表于 2011-3-25 22:10:25
写得非常好,语法也用的很正确。不过西方一般把猫用she,除非只知道它的性别而且特意区别。

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jane323 发表于 2011-3-26 15:01:28
I have two kittens. They are very beautiful. One is yellow, and other is white.They are very cute.It's very naughty the yellow one, he always run wild. The most favorite game of he is play balls, ropes and stones. But the white one is very gentle, she likes to wash her face, and she doesn't like to play with people. She often jump to my knees, I live to give her a bath.

Oh, my kittens bring me more happiness. We are the best friends. I love them.
jane323 发表于 2011-3-29 12:43:44
回复 1# Dive

楼主你的问题还没有解决么,还有什么疑惑。说出来大家为用看看
denise521029 发表于 2011-4-1 23:16:53

RE: 英语作文帮忙修改

I have two baby cats.They are very beautiful.One is yellow,the other is white.They are very lovely.The yellow cat is very naughty.It likes playing with people.It often runs everywhere.

Oh, my baby cats bring me more happiness.
luffy218 发表于 2011-5-4 15:24:24
不错的,谢谢LZ了
kevincen 发表于 2018-5-26 13:34:15
good。   learning
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