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本帖最后由 annyli 于 2009-4-7 21:26 编辑 lesson 49 the rewriting and in practise Tired of living in the factory, my friend saved up for years to buy a new house in Chinatown. For the first time in his life. he became the proud owner of a house which a beautiful garden. because the weather was very hot, he carried his bed in to the garden. he slept very well for the first night, but on the second night, a storm blew up. A gust of wind swept a big tree was uprooted and it was fell on his bed. The bed was broken, but my firend was miraculously unhurt. When he woke up, he glancing at the leaves and branches were full of around him. He sadly picked up his bed and carried into his house. Then he promptly went to sleep again. |
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基本上是根据课文内容写的，没编新故事。 抛砖引玉，支持David的新做法。 A young man in Teheran was tired of sleeping on the floor, so he saved up for years to buy a real bed which had springs and a mattress. For the first time in his life, he was proud of having such a bed. Because the weather was very hot, he carried the bed on to the roof of his house. He slept very well in the first two nights, but on the third night a storm blew up. A gust of wind swept the bed off the roof and it then crashed into the courtyard below. The man slept soundly and he did not wake up until the bed had struck the ground. Although the bed was smashed to pieces, the man was miraculously unhurt. When he woke up he was still on the mattress. After he had had a glance at the bits of wood and metal that lay around him, he sadly picked up the mattress and carried it into his house. Putting the mattress on the floor, the man promptly went to sleep again. Unfortunately, the dream of the young man of sleeping on a real bed ended there. |
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本帖最后由 shirley0086574 于 2009-4-7 21:24 编辑 还有更积极的朋友哦！ |
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本帖最后由 sean.lee 于 2009-4-7 20:53 编辑 Tired of go to work by bike, a young man in london saved up for years to buy a real car. For the first time in his life, he became the proud owner of a car which had speed and a facility. Because the trafic was very heavy, he drived the car onthe byway of countryside. He felt very well for the first two weeks, but on the third weeks, a storm blew up. A gust of wind swept the car off the way and sent it crashing into the valley below. The young man did not control ituntil the car had struck the ground. Although the car was smashed to distortion, the man was miraculously unhurt. When he calmed , he was still at seat. Glancing at the bits of spare part and metal that lay around him, the man sadly picked up the wheel and carried it noto the way. After he had put it on the road, he promptly went to work again. |
| tied of sweeping with his baby ,the yang father in beijing saved up for years to buy a real crib . for the first time in his life he became the proud owner of a crib which had springs and a mattress. because of the hot weather, he carried the crib and her baby on to the roof of his house. they swept very well for the first two nights, but on the third night, a storm blew up. a gust of wind swept the crib with the child off the roof and sent it into courtyard below. the father did not wake up until the crib had struck the grand. although the crib was amashed to pieces, the baby was miraculously unhurt. when the yang father run down the baby was stillon the mattress. gancing at the bits of wood and metal the man picked up the baby and carried in his arm into his house. after he had put the baby on the big bed he promptly went to sleep again. |
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