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Lesson 49 课课文复述与改写

发布者: david | 发布时间: 2009-4-7 19:52| 查看数: 1862| 评论数: 5|

请大家根据下面的关键词,把49课课文的英文复述出来或者根据这些提示改写出一篇新故事。欢迎大家对其他人写的进行评点。

..的一个年轻人由于对...感到厌倦, 于是积蓄多年买了一张真正的... 他平生第一次自豪地拥有了一... 由于天气很.., 他便把..搬到了他的... 头两天晚上, 他..得非常好. 但第三天晚上起了... 一阵大..把..从..上刮了下来, 把它摔碎在下面的院子里. 那年轻人直到...才..了过来. 尽管..摔成了碎片, 但年轻人却奇迹般地没有受伤. 他..来时, 仍然躺在..上. 年轻人看了一眼周围的碎木片和碎金属片, 伤心地捡起了.., 把它拿进了屋. 他把...往地板上一放, 很快又睡着了.

最新评论

annyli 发表于 2009-4-7 20:03:56

希望大家帮助纠错啊

本帖最后由 annyli 于 2009-4-7 21:26 编辑

lesson 49 the rewriting and in practise

Tired of living in the factory, my friend saved up for years to buy a new house in Chinatown.

For the first time in his life. he became the proud owner of a house which a beautiful garden.

because the weather was very hot, he carried his bed in to the garden.

he slept very well for the first night, but on the second night, a storm blew up.

A gust of wind swept a big tree was uprooted and it was fell on his bed.

The bed was broken, but my firend was miraculously unhurt.

When he woke up, he glancing at the leaves and branches were full of around him.

He sadly picked up his bed and carried into his house.

Then he promptly went to sleep again.
shirley0086574 发表于 2009-4-7 20:28:57
基本上是根据课文内容写的,没编新故事。

抛砖引玉,支持David的新做法。

A young man in Teheran was tired of sleeping on the floor, so he saved up for years to buy a real bed which had springs and a mattress. For the first time in his life, he was proud of having such a bed. Because the weather was very hot, he carried the bed on to the roof of his house. He slept very well in the first two nights, but on the third night a storm blew up. A gust of wind swept the bed off the roof and it then crashed into the courtyard below. The man slept soundly and he did not wake up until the bed had struck the ground. Although the bed was smashed to pieces, the man was miraculously unhurt. When he woke up he was still on the mattress. After he had had a glance at the bits of wood and metal that lay around him, he sadly picked up the mattress and carried it into his house. Putting the mattress on the floor, the man promptly went to sleep again. Unfortunately, the dream of the young man of sleeping on a real bed ended there.
shirley0086574 发表于 2009-4-7 20:30:41
本帖最后由 shirley0086574 于 2009-4-7 21:24 编辑

还有更积极的朋友哦!
sean.lee 发表于 2009-4-7 20:50:55

be careful in drive

本帖最后由 sean.lee 于 2009-4-7 20:53 编辑

Tired of go to work by bike, a young man in london saved up for years to buy a real car.

For the first time in his life, he became the proud owner of a car which had speed and a facility.

Because the trafic was very heavy, he drived the car onthe byway of countryside.

He felt very well for the first two weeks, but on the third weeks, a storm blew up.

A gust of wind swept the car off the way and sent it crashing into the valley below.

The young man did not control ituntil the car had struck the ground.

Although the car was smashed to distortion, the man was miraculously unhurt.

When he calmed , he was still at seat.

Glancing at the bits of spare part and metal that lay around him,

the man sadly picked up the wheel and carried it noto the way.

After he had put it on the road, he promptly went to work again.
dahong_78 发表于 2009-4-7 21:15:06
tied of sweeping with his baby ,the yang father in beijing saved up for years to buy a real crib . for the first time in his life he became the proud owner of a crib which had springs and a mattress. because of the hot weather, he carried the crib and her baby on to the roof of his house. they swept very well for the first two nights, but on the third night, a storm blew up. a gust of wind swept the crib with the child off the roof and sent it into courtyard below. the father did not wake up until the crib had struck the grand. although the crib was amashed to pieces, the baby was miraculously unhurt. when the yang father run down the baby was stillon the mattress. gancing at the bits of wood and metal the man picked up the baby and carried in his arm into his house. after he had put the baby on the big bed he promptly went to sleep again.
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