这个是如诗同学根据新二36课课文改写的作文，请大家帮他改错

We are going to learn New Concept English Book Two completely in NCE Garden of UC in the coming days .I also decide to set out the journey of learning English from lesson 36 tonight .Although I am more than forty years old and I still hope to set up a new record , which I will recite the whole textbook of New Concept English Book Two. I am a strong minded learner and many people say that I am sure to succeed .The teachers in this roomwill set out with us to learn English .They have helped us a lot .Tomorrow , our teachers will be accompany with us warm-heartedly as we begin our start of learning . I plan to take short rests every two hours during the learning time ,I will listen to the tape and write some short passages according to the text. Most of classmates in the room of UC will be taking care of me .Among them will be my English partner Carefree, she is also my close friend who finished reciting the whole textbook of New Concept English Book Two last year , when she was forty years old .I hope I can do the job as good as she has done .

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1# david

1. strong minded learner——strong-willed

2. our teachers will be accompany with us ——delete "be" and "with"

3. Most of classmates in the room of UC will be taking care of me——delete "of", "be taking" changed to "take".

谢谢老师的建议， 我明白了， 我再修改一下。