"我们原先的英文描述有点简单和不清楚，令读者产生歧义。“

请帮忙把这个句子给译成地道的英语，谢谢！

[ 本帖最后由 juicemeeting 于 2008-7-29 17:22 编辑 ]

Our original description in English is a little bit simple and unclear, causing misunderstanding to the reader

I dont know how to translate it into real English,but I have a try..FYI.

"我们原先的英文描述有点简单和不清楚，令读者产生歧义

our former description in English is kinda simple and unclear,which make readers feel ambiguous,

令读者产生歧义?

是不是有语法问题呀?

The former englsih trasnation by us was a little sinple and unclear,that made readers confused!

The former englsih trasnation by us was a little simple and unclear,that made readers confused!