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A terrible case ( the wicked society )

热度 5已有 1261 次阅读2009-3-14 17:45 |

A terrible case was happened on my mother-in-law lately .   Yesterday , i went to see my mother-in-law , she told me a terrible case concerned her . A few days ago , she had a walk herself in the street on a fine afternoon .By the way , she wanna see an old firend of her .She had no sooner arrived at the gate of her firend than two thieves rushed towards her , one of them  had robbbed her a pair of gold earrings before she had no any reaction , another of them stayed at the wheels , they did this as quickly  as they
 could .As my mother-in-law  said , they only spent  a few seconds to do this , she even could not see what the thieves look like .They are the hardened professional robber .  One of her ears has been hurted , it  isn't  well until now ,she was still in a frightening condition while she talked about this with me . As my father-in-law said , now it's a wicked society .2009 is unfortunate for my family , my sister-in-law's handbag just was robbed on her way to work and my new mobile phone was stolen,too,now following my mother-in-law was suffered from robbers. In our town , a great number of cases are happening   every day ,every month and every year . The government can't control the situation,  i don't know when we'll live in  a peaceful and safe society where will be no any bad things to be happened , i am looking forward to seeing the day is coming
 

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回复 茹诗 2009-3-14 19:14
文章叙述的很清晰。
问题如下:
1.注意标点和句子首字母大写。
2.a few days before ;是否用ago。ago指从说话时算起的若干时间以前, 常与一般过去时连用;before可以指从过去某个时间起的若干时间以前, 常和过去完成时连用。
3. wanna :有过去式吗?我不懂。
4.what the thieves look like :looked like。right?
5.it  isn't  good until now :是否应该用well。用于健康方面的良好, 好像用well。如果我错了, 记得告诉我正确的哈。
以上是我的理解, 我真的不敢指点你的错误,想来自己才没学几天英语,在这里还“品头论足”,谢谢你给我的鼓励。
最后姐姐要说的是:不要因为这几件偶然的事情,搅乱你的心态。相信自己会好运常伴的哈。
回复 liberty 2009-3-14 20:09
thanks ,honey ,your advice is very good , 'll accept it
回复 草水 2009-3-16 11:32
,可恨的小偷,盗贼。自己平时要多注意。文章写的很好(哈哈),但时态好像是有点问题,你在看看。
回复 liberty 2009-3-16 17:52
草水: ,可恨的小偷,盗贼。自己平时要多注意。文章写的很好(哈哈),但时态好像是有点问题,你在看看。
thanks, i'll think of it carefully
回复 jesse2009 2009-3-24 18:41
well,beautiful words .maybe the world now is not harmonious.and where do you live now ?actually the thieves should be ashamed and we must learn from these and be careful in the street.
回复 liberty 2009-3-24 19:04
jesse2009: well,beautiful words .maybe the world now is not harmonious.and where do you live now ?actually the thieves should be ashamed and we must learn from t
yes, thanks for your review
回复 Sonata 2009-4-10 06:59
我得加油了。。。。。路漫漫哦
回复 悠然 2009-4-10 07:20
hateable thieves.i 've just lost a new bike too.
Is your mother -in-low better now?
回复 Keathy 2009-4-15 17:40
I have the same experience this year, bad luck.
But it will be better soon.
回复 oyster 2009-5-8 09:02
good story you made. everything will be going better
回复 sunny612 2009-11-15 13:56
社會就沒有一天安穩的時候,任何時候任何區域都在發生著同類的事情,讓人受不了。

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