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lost my way

热度 2已有 823 次阅读2010-3-4 18:04 |个人分类:Life|

Last week,about on Thursday.I went to my workmate's home.I had a meal  there.At about  9 o'colock,I was going to back home,but i couldn't  find the way home.Suddenly,I saw a young man stood at the crossing.And i asked him how to take the bus No. 39.He told  me the way to the No.39 bus stop.when i arrived the bus stop later,the NO.39 bus was come.I took the bus.But about 5 minutes late,i found the bus arrived the terminal.Oh,my god! I was very sad, i found that i took the contrary bus.

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回复 zwqi1999 2010-3-4 22:44
不介意我纠正几处错误吧?...i had a meal there....  but i couldn't find the way home. ...i saw a young man standing at the crossing.  a moment 改为later, the bus was coming,  taked改为took
回复 kevingogo 2010-3-6 14:02
zwqi1999: 不介意我纠正几处错误吧?...i had a meal there....  but i couldn't find the way home. ...i saw a young man standing at the crossing.  a moment 改为later,
非常感谢你的指导!
呵呵。。我的英文很差,还在努力学习中!
回复 kevingogo 2010-3-6 14:29
我之前学的英语差不多都忘完了,现在想重新把它拾回来,现在学习中,所以我想学习用英语写日志。我也知道我的英文日志肯定有很多问题。我在这上面写英文日志,希望能被很多英文很好的网友看到,也真诚的希望你们能帮我指出日志英文表达错误的地方!望不吝赐教,在此谢谢了!
回复 kevingogo 2010-3-6 14:32
现在日志已经按"zwqi1999"指点更改过了。在些表示感谢!如果还有其它地方有问题的,请各位英语达人不吝指教!

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